Flowerfell

Flowerfell

A Poem by yuhee
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"Oh Mary contrary how does your garden grow" - Secret Garden

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Oh Mary contrary

How does your garden grow?

When you always die tomorrow

 


Oh Mary contrary

Tell me, what flower did you sow?

Does its seed come from your sorrow?

 

 

Oh Mary contrary

Can you hear me?

When I offered my hand

And told you come with me?

 


Oh Mary contrary

I‘m afraid

Am I too late?

Does the flower already dead?



Oh Mary contrary

Can you see?

Now you are finally free



© 2017 yuhee


Author's Note

yuhee
Another vocaloid song inspired poetry. And undertale too.. Sorry just got hooked on it. Again, pardon me...

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I wonder what vocaloid song you got inspired from, because I love writing things inspired by those songs. For this poem, I absolutely loved the way it flowed. Every stanza was powerful and held its own meaning. That Undertale picture is also very beautiful (even though I've never played the game). Great job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yuhee

7 Years Ago

Such a praise you gave. I'm very honored. I just happened to stumble on the song Secret garden and l.. read more



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The Secret Garden is one of my favorite books, and so this connection lifted me into your words, the painful pondering of your thoughts, of living and dying and wondering when it all ends.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I wonder what vocaloid song you got inspired from, because I love writing things inspired by those songs. For this poem, I absolutely loved the way it flowed. Every stanza was powerful and held its own meaning. That Undertale picture is also very beautiful (even though I've never played the game). Great job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yuhee

7 Years Ago

Such a praise you gave. I'm very honored. I just happened to stumble on the song Secret garden and l.. read more

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Added on March 26, 2017
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Tags: fiction, love, lost, death, separation, pain, hurt

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yuhee
yuhee

XII, Philippines



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