Why?

She asks why? Only wishing she knew the answer...

I wish I knew the answer
To why you had to go.

***

Why?
I ask...

Why did you do this to him
And not me?

Why did you have to end his life
And not mine?

Why did you make us say goodbye
For the last time

Why did he
Have to die?

I keep asking
Why?

***

I won't ever relive the day
I watched him die

Because...
It makes me cry

***

I'll never know why
He had to die

Reviews

[Chloe Christine]

although i am tired of these sad pieces,
its very well written and i love it.
Great job!

[Brandon]

Very strong piece here. Great job

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that's a punch to the guts..yes the emotion is flowing through this piece...heartfelt indeed..

[Havatara]

You can tell that it comes from the heart. It almost made me cry! Good job.

[Jessica Mai]

Really heartfelt. The best poems come from true feeling and you can definitely tell how true this is.

[not your typical girl]

it definitely comes from the heart though it may not be absolutely perfect technically.
it just oozes out sadness. plain, truthful, honest, unpretentious, unshrinking Sadness.

[Brutality's Sake]

It's dripping with emotion. Beautiful write.

[kbjami]

Sad.
Death sucks.
Grief sucks.
Sorry for the awful time you had to go through.

[Satchmo's Gal]

The format to me was a bit confusing, and to me it was honestly a bit too cliche for my taste, but your writing is really, really good. Its all the matter of coming up with a good story idea. Thats my two cents.

[lamia]

you showed well your emotions in this piece , as always you did a good job