Undisturbed

UNDISTURBED

Curled up, brittle, faded fallen leaves

Lying peacefully unnoticed on the floor.

The sun rays hit the dusty tree

Rooted upright on a barren land.

Dried soil, thirsty earth

Waiting for the shower of rain.

The first drop meets the ground

Essence of petrichor diffused

Water splashes on the tree

Erasing the dust.

Leaves, drenched in water

Feel refreshed.

Stationary scene back in movement

With the downpour of rain.

Life back in action after a long pause

Like the change in nature

Everything at place after a chase,

Patience is what it takes. 

Reviews

[Mikku]

The earth got what it needed to survive but not all of us get that most awaited drop of life... Nice piece

[Najam Us Saher]

You are right. I am glad that you understood what I wanted to convey. Thank you so much.

[Farhan Shaikh]

This is really good, I loved it as always

[Najam Us Saher]

I am really overwhelmed to hear this :)

[Abraham George]

Your views are so specific and i like how you see the world through your eyes. Everyone likes natures and your poem is also good. But i know this is not your best.

[Najam Us Saher]

I didn't like this that much but it contains a deeper meaning that when everything seems to have come to a stop there will come a time where time rushes and takes you to a place where you belong, like a tree when all the leaves have fallen and the tree is dusty and dry and the soil dried, in time of that dullness when rain refreshes the tree it is like a rejuvenation, I haven't conveyed this meaning well. Thank you very much for a honest review. Much appreciated. ☺

[Abraham George]

think more and please make it better. i want it to be more better.

[Najam Us Saher]

I will give it a try.

[Abraham George]

Good. waiting to read it after your editing.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Wao Its really so beautiful how nature replenishes itself and gives back what the Earth deserves

[Najam Us Saher]

True...Thank you so much for reading :)