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I heal

I heal

A Poem by Najam Us Saher
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A new day has come

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I HEAL
Trying to forget the sorrows, my heart- I seal,
Ruptured emotions of my ruthless life- I conceal,
Passion and concern from the one who loves me, I feel,
After years of tormented life, finally; I heal.

Rage vanished and anger dissolved,
Situation changed and heart resolved,
Life gave me a chance; It absolved,
After years of patience, Love evolved.

Negative thoughts faded as confusion,
Sadness left me and ended my seclusion,
I find myself happy and away from isolation,
At last, I hope I feel excluded from depression.

Everything appears blissful and pleasing,
I find my love for you, increasing,
Sadness to happiness my feelings are replacing,
Happy I am, I find myself healing. 

Your acceptance, I encounter,
You made me feel beautiful as a flower,
You- I want to empower,
Love upon you, I shower. 

I wish to be with you in every phase,
I promise to never part ways,
I hope I brighten your days,
I pray, love keep us together always. 

© 2018 Najam Us Saher



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Saved by love! Beautiful.

Posted 3 Hours Ago


Ever the critic and picky lover of rhymes, I would point to this poem as a model example of how rhymes should be--not too singsongy while keeping that melodic flow with rhymes that don't detract from the content in order to fulfill that necessity of rhymes. The rhymes are the highlight of each line as if it is emphasis while being somehow understated. Simple and exquisite.

Posted 3 Days Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Days Ago

Thank you so much for mentioning the important quality about this poem- the rhyme.
Every app.. read more
The flow of this poem is amazing, quite inspiring and deep. I found great joy in reading it

Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

Couldn't be more happy to hear it. Thank you very much.
Nice poem written with rhyme and nice choice of words... It is filled with emotion and promises the the poet made for someone.
Thanks for share.
:-)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

I thank you so much for reading. ☺
Aw. That is so sweet, I especially like that first beat

Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

Thank you very much.
love the rhyming in this and descriptives and repetitive sometimes
love it, its very good
thanks for entry into my comp again

Posted 7 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

6 Months Ago

I thank you so much for creating them. ☺
Juliespenhere

6 Months Ago

you are most welcome
You can catch me on fewwordsoftales.wordpress.com if you like some Hindi poems too.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

8 Months Ago

I have read your poem 'chubti kalam' those words wrenches the hearts of readers. It is so deep and e.. read more
Mustafa Merchant

8 Months Ago

Oh you did. Thank you. Even that blog remains very discreet as my writings here.
Feels good to see a happy ending. Hope it remains like this till eternity.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

8 Months Ago

I thank you from depths of my heart for such kind words.
that is a loving poem hopeful and happy excellent writing
as for my poem it is unhappiness about the healing process that has not happened yet maybe never and in my case scars galore you have the talent for expression

Posted 9 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

9 Months Ago

It is never too late to heal and miracles happen.
I appreciate your words, thank you very mu.. read more
marilyn 1225

9 Months Ago

well in my case there will be no miracles as to love, but my miracles are my children and grandc.. read more

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Najam Us Saher
Najam Us Saher

Hyderabad, India



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