Locked without LOVE

Locked without LOVE

A Poem by Nickdykstra
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Very inspiring poem about how I changed and let no obstacle make me a statistic to prison. Mistakes make you stronger. Feedback appreciated, thank you.......

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Locked up without LOVE
By:Nicholas Dykstra

Love is powerful and priceless,
Without it can drive you senseless.

Many years with no written letters,
Can hurt your mind, body, soul; neglect from others.

What doesn't kill You makes you stronger,
I believed and and made it without a hand “out-er”.

Four years of my young life taken by the system,
A kid without guidance is indeed a victim.

Learn that lost love will tear you down,
But don't give up because it's just a round.

Obstacles ahead will appear in your life,
Take a deep breath, and think twice.

Mistakes are made due to being human,
It's changing your life for GOD and bettering yourself Anjuman.




Nicholas Dykstra@2016

© 2016 Nickdykstra



Author's Note

Nickdykstra
I know there will be confusion but go to the end and there is a link for ones who don't believe me, awesome finding in a word- anjuman, meaning - means “In the meeting of desires.” I meant as we make mistakes, do hard time at a young age, learn that no love remained and grew without it. It's a Persian meaning - ANJUMAN (Persian)means “In the meeting of desires.”

Found and researched at https://lyricstaal.com/glossary/anjuman-meaning-in-english-hindi/

Thank you , the Persian word is a great inspiration to MY LIFE of recovery.

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@Ashish, thank you for your review and time reading my work.much appreciated

Posted 11 Months Ago


Love: it is simply complicated

An inspiring work nick
Keep writing :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerful words. A life of recovery is never-ending but worthwhile, nevertheless. You're a strong person for never giving up.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nickdykstra

11 Months Ago

@Nessly , thank you means alot :)
Nessly

11 Months Ago

You're welcome. :)
We all make mistakes. It takes a strong person to admit them. With God you can climb to the top. Valentine

Posted 12 Months Ago


@shabeeh , thank you for your time and review, means alot and look forward to writing more related material.

Posted 12 Months Ago


We learn a lot from life and our mistakes make us stronger and mature.
Nicely penned.

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

@yummakay thank you , means alot, thank you for the time reading.

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

12 Months Ago

Oh you are welcome! My pleasure ☺
What doesn't kill us makes us stronger only to the degree that we turn indifferent towards it.. You convey the message of moving forward with simplicity and in powerful impact. This is really good work here ☺

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

@gee thank you so much! Means alot and thank you again for reviewing my work.

Posted 12 Months Ago


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Gee
We all learn from our mistakes and hopefully improve for the better. Life itself is a great teacher, only trouble is by the time you start to fully understand its true beauty the old reaper is prowling around in the shadows. Enjoyed the read

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 24, 2016
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