Locked without LOVE

Very inspiring poem about how I changed and let no obstacle make me a statistic to prison. Mistakes make you stronger. Feedback appreciated, thank you.......

Locked up without LOVE
By:Nicholas Dykstra

Love is powerful and priceless,
Without it can drive you senseless.

Many years with no written letters,
Can hurt your mind, body, soul; neglect from others.

What doesn't kill You makes you stronger,
I believed and and made it without a hand “out-er”.

Four years of my young life taken by the system,
A kid without guidance is indeed a victim.

Learn that lost love will tear you down,
But don't give up because it's just a round.

Obstacles ahead will appear in your life,
Take a deep breath, and think twice.

Mistakes are made due to being human,
It's changing your life for GOD and bettering yourself Anjuman.




Nicholas Dykstra@2016

Author's Note

I know there will be confusion but go to the end and there is a link for ones who don't believe me, awesome finding in a word- anjuman, meaning - means “In the meeting of desires.” I meant as we make mistakes, do hard time at a young age, learn that no love remained and grew without it. It's a Persian meaning - ANJUMAN (Persian)means “In the meeting of desires.”

Found and researched at https://lyricstaal.com/glossary/anjuman-meaning-in-english-hindi/

Thank you , the Persian word is a great inspiration to MY LIFE of recovery.

Reviews

[Kay/Hayden]

Love truly is a maze of different ways to go. It can be VERY confusing. Keep writing and stay inspired. -Kay

[Nickdykstra]

@Ashish, thank you for your review and time reading my work.much appreciated

[Ashish]

Love: it is simply complicated

An inspiring work nick
Keep writing :)

[Nessly]

Powerful words. A life of recovery is never-ending but worthwhile, nevertheless. You're a strong person for never giving up.

[Nickdykstra]

@Nessly , thank you means alot :)

[Nessly]

You're welcome. :)

[Valentine]

We all make mistakes. It takes a strong person to admit them. With God you can climb to the top. Valentine

[Nickdykstra]

@shabeeh , thank you for your time and review, means alot and look forward to writing more related material.

[Shabeeh Haider]

We learn a lot from life and our mistakes make us stronger and mature.
Nicely penned.

[Nickdykstra]

@yummakay thank you , means alot, thank you for the time reading.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Oh you are welcome! My pleasure ☺

[Dr. YumnaKay]

What doesn't kill us makes us stronger only to the degree that we turn indifferent towards it.. You convey the message of moving forward with simplicity and in powerful impact. This is really good work here ☺

[Nickdykstra]

@gee thank you so much! Means alot and thank you again for reviewing my work.