Your Cello

Your Cello

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

Music is my first love, ....................

"

Your Cello

Such effervescent virginity

overwhelms my nature 

as the colours, the vibrant

odours of your sex,

assault my senses

until I am insane

with brutal desire.

Until I am intoxicated,

inebriated

with an innate need

that cannot be satisfied

without you.

Your cello speaks

in a vibrant, sexy language,

your face,

your eyes speak

in sensual waves

like tsunami

kisses,

and I am insatiate,

I am not satisfied

without you,

and never will be.

 

03/12/17

© 2017 John Alexander McFadyen


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I love music. People, who can play the cello. They tempt our ears and our eyes. I liked your thoughts and the honest ending. Thank you John for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


i love the cello and viola ..and vilin ..they are incredible instruments ..you personifications of them hit the mark ..sensuous write that inspires this ol' man to wish .....upon a star or maybe get drunk meself ;))
E.
ps. i feel saddened you have closed your account here .. hope all is well

Posted 6 Years Ago


and why should we be,love should bloom with in us all

Posted 6 Years Ago


Fine poem, great idea, and the short lines gives this
a lot of energy, advise all to look at this !

Posted 6 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

Thank you Leslie. This sprang from a classical concerto

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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