My Buttered Back, an audio

My Buttered Back Audio

What follows is a flame tanka and gasp it rhymes. 

It also mixes metaphor into a lovely little melange that bites back. 

I wrote it many moons ago. 

So is it about you … probably not … 

Unless you think it's about you.

 And then it is. 

But I'm certainly channeling another poet. 

It's not may fault you have a guilty conscience.

 In short let the merit of your words match your actions 

Or better yet … 

Let the merit of your actions surpass your words.

Click on the audio, Beauties, listen and then review

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uXIxrZ5eEKQ&list=UU8rAsV8Dot4MbmtGZOA0UlQ

My Buttered Back is published in Tattoo, Calling All Soldiers Home.

Tattoo is available form the link below and through your local bookstore.

Author's Note

Captcha … songish

Reviews

[Moonie]

Ooh, the lying sweet talkers who stab you when you least expect it. I loved the concept!!

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

real smooth.....!!!
awesome poem!
i loved it!!!
:)

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Pushkar:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome........:) :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Sweet talkers... my Italian father had another name for them, and taught me to steer clear. Great tanka, Pryde.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Rita … pray tell what was the name?

[TL Boehm]

why am I drooling. Oh butter. you had me at butter. (no really, I've been dairy free for almost two months. Send cheese please)
Found this one delightful.

[Pryde Foltz]

Dairy free … yep later the milk … but cheese and cream please:)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Pryde... you are an author to be
reckoned with and I mean that as a great
complement. I look forward to reading your
books. Your poem is surely an appetizer...
very tasty and deliciously penned.
truly... Pat

[Pryde Foltz]

Very kind. Thank you, Patricia.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Amazing poem, you've got here. :-) I loved reading this write.

Kaze~

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Katherine.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-))

[Matching Socks]

I love your readings Pryde.
Great poem, I think you've described more or less every man I've ever dated.
I think I'm going to start dating plumbers and electricians from now on. Poets and musicians are OUT.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Ana …. yes the silvery tongued ones can be deceiving:)

[Avinash]

Smooth talkers cut deeper with their sweet tongues. So have to be careful. Enjoyed listening as well.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Avinash:)

[Ruth]

Clever...you always inspire darling...a taste of intelligent sublime xo

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Poppy.

[ANM]

Buttered back endless possibilities some of them not very nice I wager! Great little poem

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, ANM.

[ANM]

You are welcome Pryde!