A never ending Love.

life is so short. so Love, laugh, and above all Live,

 

Before her, he stands

Silhouetted by the bright light

She needs to see him before it starts

 

She stands before him

So small and vulnerable

He is looking at his heart

The beauty of it is blinding

 

Tentatively she reaches out

Heart pounding

Heavy breathing

He meets her half way

 

Finally they touch

Worlds collide

Heaven and earth meet

Soon they will be one

 

The spell is broken

With the words uttered

“We are gathered here today…”

Nothing ells really matters.

 

Time has stood still

Finally their souls will be one

Hand in hand, they turn and walk into the mist.

“… to lay to rest our beloved sister…”

Reviews

[Katherine Wyatt]

This is so well written.I had to read it a few times..Love Never Dies..Beautiful//Love how you showed what was happening on the earthly plane..a funeral..and what was happening on the spiritual plane..the reconciliation of the two lovers..and the description of how he could see her heart..beauty that was blinding..very deep and special!

[CricketSong]

I enjoyed this very much. The imagery was beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

[Adela Muresan]

Well, the ending was unexpected...but it's a beautiful poem nevertheless.
I like the ,,sublime,, way you present the spiritual union, and the detail of the clerk's words.

A.M.

[Michael X]

This excellent poem is moving and really well written, has a way of creating an emotion
in the reader and cause the heart to look inward with a sense of grief and sorrow,
intently invented metaphorical reflection describing intense sorrow, missing someone
close to the heart, I loved it, great job.

[WordMaster]

This is a wonderfully crafted and emotionally charged poem.

You have done a magnificent job of expressing emotion in loving imagery

Well done