Come here! (slightly hot)

Free Verse

         

Come here!

Let's wrap-up in one another ... 
share enough time 
to watch tree bark grow. 

Grab a piece of sky, 
compare it to my eyes;
I'll caress your face,
imagining the velvet touch
of a sigh's softness, 

or ... 

what your quiv'ring thighs 
feel like 
embracing rippled ache
of rigid ardour. 

Grass traces the wind, 
your eyes my soul, 
and every vein 
in every leaf 
the designs 
our blood 
follows 
to every place, 
calling to be filled ~ 
fulfilled. 

Deep, soft, sensual;
the pools 
of your eyes. 

Into them I dive, 
becoming 
lost inside You ... 

Come here! 

Oh, take me there, 
show me 
what eyes can never see, 
only that which 
lovers know ... 
feel ... 
taste ~ 
with, without the tongue. 

No book yet ever written 
tells us how to love, 
(not that they do not try); 
tells us how it feels to make-love, 
moving friction … 
sensations 
of it all;
yet, they try 
that, too. 

Come here! 

I'm ready, 
if you are ... 

Let's You and I 
find out 
and write 
our own book ~ 


Richard W. Jenkins 
          ©2015

Reviews

[Susan 🦋]

Interesting...you took sky/eyes..ALMOST ryhme in your little free verse and repeated the word TRY. Hmmm. Drive, try, I and inside...repetition of the long (i) sound..got it. plenty of nice little breaks, has the reader pondering thoughts..emphasis on come here! To the question in a sense..If you are....is she? hmm presentation is lovely..smooth flowing, winding down..to hopeful anticipation.

[Richard🖌]

Nice observation of my intertwining technique, Susan, one that keeps the rhymes quiet, yet, allows a semblance of them to slightly tease the senses, eh?
Nothing's amiss with your more feminine intuitions, either. ; )

Warmest hugs! ⁓ Richard ✨

[kitty]

Brought to page in a smiling carefree mood. Captures the thought/ imagination of your readers in a light hearted and carefree manner ~ blocking out the cares and worries of today taking one in a world wher one can wallow in the sensuous feeling of love and romance. Thanks for taking this reader through 'that door'!

[J. J. Nightingale]

..show me what eyes can never see.....................................

A most fitting Poem for this fine Spring Day...

Heated......but not burning lines..lol

Did enjoy .. J.J.

[Richard🖌]

So, you favor that verse, Lady Jasmine.
It does seem to catch and warm the mind's-eye quite nicely; I think so, too … good choice.

Yes, I agree … Happy Spring, M'Dear Lady.
Thanks for enjoying me/my poetry! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[J. J. Nightingale]

You are welcome kind Sir.... ♥ ...

[Coyote Poetry]

Soft and gentle erotic poetry my friend. The best kind. Thank you Richard for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Richard🖌]

It is my distinct pleasure to receive your gratifying words, John, and how encouraging your praise, My Fine Friend.
I must truly agree with you, too … it is, indeed, the "best kind"! ; )

Bless you on this wonderful day! ⁓ Richard

[Zenovia]

Oh, take me there,
show me
what eyes can never see,
only that which
lovers know ...
feel ...
taste ~
with, without the tongue.

sensual depiction of getting lost in each other!

I enjoyed the calling !

[Richard🖌]

Yes, Zenovia …
that particular verse does, indeed, caress with deeper sensation than its words convey! ; )

As I, too, warmly enjoyed your coming, Zenovia ⁓ Richard

[Ellen Kolman]

I'm always ready.....excellent poem....Bravo Richard, I loved it

[Richard🖌]

"GULP!"
Goodness, Ellen!
Had to steady my hand a bit. ; )

I bow in warmest gratitude for your presence here upon my page, and for such sweet, inspiring praise of this slightly sizzling little teaser.

A bard shares his wares in hopes of such a review … hugs 'n blessings! ⁓ Richard

[Crimson_ish]

I honestly spend half my time here reading your poetry, I love this so much, the nature, oh the nature, and the yearning, and the passion, honestly, I am still dwelling in that poem, such a fascinating poem! I can perceive all the minute feelings and images, as though I reside in them, it's so wonderfully hypnotizing! Thank you for this amazing poem, Richard :)

[Richard🖌]

Oh-MY, Kajal*
How your warming words pull me into you, sharing that which moves so beautifully from my mind, heart, and soul into your own … as only poets can.
Such is the monumental praise you've bestowed in your opening unto me of how half your time here is spent, and even more-so that you perceive (we relate, perhaps?) in your depths "all the minute feelings and images" … goodness-ME!
Well, I cannot deny how "wonderfully hypnotizing" your own words are for me … a wondrously moving poem in themselves.
How can I help but respond with gratitude and my warmest "Thank You" in return … hugs to you, Kajal ⁓ Richard

[Crimson_ish]

Hugs to you too! You should be crowned with the prettiest words for these gorgeous poems! You always flatter me! :)

[Richard🖌]

It is but my voice singing of that which you've inspired within me ⁓*

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Sensually enriching... Words that hold the power to quench the thirsty love, adorably.
Enjoyed the imagery.
Beautiful write, sir.

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, M'Sweet Little Lady*
Your delightful words of knowing and lovely praise are more gratification than this hopeful bard could expect, but I love them … big hugs to you, Jyoti! ⁓ Richard

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are very welcome.

[katie]

This is beautiful! Incredibly sensual description of getting lost in each other! Lovely imagery! You have some amazing talent!

[Richard🖌]

Dear Katie,
Isn't loving and getting lost together in one another sooo sublimely wonderful?read moreDear Katie,
Isn't loving and getting lost together in one another sooo sublimely wonderful?
I feel such warmth from your lovely praise and appreciation of this living, breathing little piece of sensually alluring bliss from my knowing olde pen, that I cannot help but thank you with all the tenderness in me — grateful blessings, with warmest joy … hugs, Katie! ⁓ Richard

[Willard Wells]

A time of passion and reflection of the pleasure and joy that is found in a strong loving relationship. Very nice piece.

[Richard🖌]

Willard,
you always know just what to say in letting me know I've done something good and you appreciate my efforts for doing so … thank you, My Friend, for reading and sharing your understanding of one of my poems … many blessings to you! ⁓ Richard

[Willard Wells]

Well Richard sometimes I get lucky. :)