Unwind

Unwind

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
"

Relax, it's Friday

"
In dizzying hues, responsibility glares
of knowing the whys and whens and wheres

Sweet bliss of amaretto amber brings
the gift of ignorance of all these things

© 2013 Rita L. Sev


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Even though I don't drink alcohol...Cheers to ya...as I sit hear drinking my apple cranberry Juice...ha

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Ha! Amaretto is an occasional treat for me, usually on Fridays after a LONG week... Thanks, Rose!
SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Im sure you deserve it too...:)
oh lord. i used to wish there were a liquor that tasted good with no aftertaste and smooth as silk...i even used to dream of the taste. then i found Disaronno...mmm, on ice! this is a great homage to the blissful nuances of amaretto.....very nice!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

My favorite spirit - wine is nice with dinner, but Amaretto is a weekend treat, too special to be ev.. read more
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

you're welcome!
So true. I am a fan of shorter works. Sometimes I want to look at a poem like I might look at a painting. This poem says much and has color. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Fireblossom!
i used to drink amaretto stone sours...on friday...after a tough week at school...

they still taste good...so does this poem with its wonderful alliteration
and great last two lines..the bliss of ignorance...what we can forget or never know in the first place...can really let us go to "that place."

that place of contentment.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Jacob. Wonder if the amaretto is a teacher thing? (or just an Italian thing;)
jacob erin-cilberto

11 Years Ago

i don't know Rita...we are both teachers...and my grandfather was an orphan who came over from Sicil.. read more
This is my story of Friday night Merlots. Loved it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thanks. Feeling Friday's pull already...
Ha which reminds me, I need a drink bad! Cheers to you and your fine work here. :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Frieda!
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Always. What's your pleasure, white or red? :-)
Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

LOL - always red! But last night really was a shot of amaretto :)
And that I think/Is why we drink.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Amen. Thanks for reading, Marie
some days the frustrations just get soooo ...yeah, teachers aren't allowed reality - they just live with it. Sometimes you do see the "light" come on... and it's so worth it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

So true. I love what I do, but by Friday night, I am tired of having to know everything. Yes, so wo.. read more
Chris

11 Years Ago

Thanks for being where you make a difference...
Had to laugh ... this was so perfect. Loved it!

jimmy


Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Glad to give a smile. Thanks!

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Rita L. Sev
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