Trust and Will

Trust and Will

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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I trust Eventuality

Live every bit of Now

Infinite in Prospect

Yet it seems somehow

The Over and Over and Over

Looks very much the same

Until I will the Universe

To switch around the Game


© 2016 Rita L. Sev



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Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
Cleaning out the house, and came across this one from 2012. It applies even more now, as I am switching up the game these days...

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Succinct and positive. I like your sense of the reality of the present and the idealism of a promise of a better tomorrow if you wish to make it so.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I like this it's very good. You describe how we learn to trust and try to live in the moment as much as we can until we get sick of the ho-hum and make things change. Well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


hello,

I liked the poem very much but I have Two notes, First you kept the rhyme for the first Four lines then you dropped it in the rest.
2nd, instead of "The Over and Over and Over" you should write "the over and over and again" in my personal opinion it would keep up with the rest.

its great work and I would love to read more


Posted 1 Year Ago


Rita L. Sev

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your comments, Haseo. I stuck with a rhyme pattern, but I know the syllable rhythm is .. read more

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Rita L. Sev
Rita L. Sev

Philadelphia, PA



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