Eyes Of Life And Death

Does a poet see through eyes of life and death?

Eyes Of Life And Death

Can't I write a happy poem

Instead of the darkened truth

Memories fit together

For the troubled youth

It is easier to understand good

But everything unknown

Creeps up on us like shadows

And destroys how we've grown

No, I will write what's seen

Through the eyes of life and death

Complexities in ethics and human belief

And ideas coined in theft

Reviews

[Eve Ola]

Well portrayed !! Good job

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you! :)

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

That's the way it is I guess.
Great piece of writing.
Well done.

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you, I am glad you like it!

[melissa]

This is amazing poem keep up the great work i can't wait to read

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you Melissa!

[melissa]

Your welcome

[Sami Khalil]

Honest to the bones and ethical. Bravo..............

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you my friend!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)................

[Bright Ocean Star]

Savannah, this is a keeper. I love the rhythm and brutal honesty that shines through in this poem. Very nice write!

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you!

[A. Amos]

This is deep and so honestly written my friend, love your soul as you always write from your heart

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you my friend! I am glad you liked it and see the soul in it! :)

[Kamari's]

Refreshing and well formatted I like the troubled youth for most writer have come from such a past ad ethics and human beliefs together will eventually drive one mad for ethics is based on moral standings when human beliefs is usually based on rash decisions and thing that have been drives into our skills since birth so I do believe everything is coined in a sense for we all replay certain thing I'm glad to see a writing addressing such things .