THE WORD NOT TOLD

How to tell you a word,
which really isn't a word for me,
but a reason for my life,
and same for my death...

Literally shattered by your smile,
often i hided it in fear,,
for sometimes i doubted,
if really i deserved your care,,,

dumb was all i left with you,
for crime it seemed to pause your words,,
as a matter of span i gained some will,
still can't over come the thrill you fill,,,

will say at next chance,
is part of my daily resolution,,,
but i hope its fine till it goes all alike,
and someday or other the ice will melt and birds wil fly :)......

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

Wow. This is emotional. It touched me deeply. I love your theme of this poem. It's so depressing though yet it has this hope at the end.
Wonderful poem. =) Keep on writing. ^u^ I enjoyed your work.

[Suditi]

The last line is so beautiful! It gives hope. :D
The emotions expressed are so intense, and raw.
Superb write.

[Shay]

i like the emotions inside each line.

[Diwakar - "The Warrior ..]

Pure & true emotions...........................lovely :-)

[closed..acct]

Deeply emotional write,
I can feel this one tug on the heart.
Simply wonderful and so full of feelings.
Amazing write.