Our Love Story

Our Love Story

A Poem by Shabeeh Haider

The job was done, 
Things were in place, 
Earth created, 
And so was Space.
Man was scattered, 
Throughout the Land,
And paths were made
Along the sand.
Clouds were adorned,
Up in the sky, 
And places made 
For birds to fly. 
The sea was made, 
For plants and fish. 
The stars were placed 
To make a wish. 
The souls that were, 
Up in the sky. 
Were placed in man,
Till he would die. . . . 

One soul somehow 
Was split in two, 
One half was me, 
The other, you. 
Two bodies lived, 
Though unaware, 
The other half 
Would be somewhere.
Though they have lived, 
So far away, 
The souls had known, 
They’d meet one day. 
And when they met, 
Both of them knew, 
They had been one, 
This fact was true. 
Now together, 
Their days are fun. 
For weren’t they, 
Meant to be ONE.

© 2016 Shabeeh Haider



Author's Note

Shabeeh Haider
Taken from my book: A VAGABOND HEART

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A love story from the beginning in the creation of the world and all that was in it and how two souls meant to be as one from that time came to be as it was meant to be; soulmates brought together as part of a foretold plan. Excellent rhyme and rhythm make your words a joy to read! I especially like the lines that speak of one soul split in two much as one would gift birth to the other.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Shabeeh Haider

1 Year Ago

Sheila, thank you for your very kind words and I am glad you liked it



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Aww. .That's so sweet....two souls split to be lost And found to be complete the perfect journey of love....very nicely potrayed.....

Posted 9 Months Ago


Shabeeh Haider

9 Months Ago

Thanks Ria. It's good to complete the journey of love.
OMG Shabeeh you have outdone yourself in this one I loved it I absolutely did. Amazing read :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


Shabeeh Haider

10 Months Ago

Luna, thank you for reading and reviewing and nice to meet you.
Seasons greetings
Wow!
Like the Universe I feel this write will last a very long time my friend. It is olde-world and fine - classical and timeless.


Posted 10 Months Ago


Shabeeh Haider

10 Months Ago

WOW Tony. I am humbled and enthralled by such beautiful words.
Thank you so much.
I absolutely L O V E this write! So beautifully created with imagination, style and with the breath of angels. (One soul somehow Was split in two, One half was me, The other, you.) Sheer genius! ~Sharon

Posted 10 Months Ago


Shabeeh Haider

10 Months Ago

Sharon, thank you for such a wonderful review. Coming from you, it is an honour indeed.
I have not read your book yet this elegant poem makes me want to out of interest the poem it's self is beautiful in the message of true love

Posted 1 Year Ago


Shabeeh Haider

1 Year Ago

Thank you Raylene. So sweet of you to go through my poems
Raylene

1 Year Ago

I try to review others to see others strengths and their muses and plus I love to read
That was awesome! A true love story from start to finish. It was a great poem and I loved every moment of reading it!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Shabeeh Haider

1 Year Ago

Diane, I am so pleased that you enjoyed it. Thank you for your review
brilliant write :) As I read it out , the flow was very good :)
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Posted 1 Year Ago


Shabeeh Haider

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your very kind words
You have created a very sweet moment for the lovers to meet... I really enjoyed reading your poem. I loved the way, you have rhymed and the way, two halves met to become one...
:) :) :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Shabeeh Haider

1 Year Ago

Thank you Riti. Many people actually believe that this is how it happens
the destiny of couples was decided at the beginning of time. I like that. and deep down, I think that's my belief, too.
Doctor, your poetry's uniquely delicious. I know I've said it before. I'll think of something original for next time.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Shabeeh Haider

1 Year Ago

I am glad my poem could match your belief. Many lovers have this very strong belief. Thank you for y.. read more
Mesmerising.it's like a melody that melts your heart...
Thanks for sharing

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Writing poetry is my passion. I have been writing since I was 10 years of age. I love the poets of the Romantic Era and am very particular about rhyme, meter and balance. I have also written many Gha.. more..

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