Wish I Could Love You

Wish I Could Love You

A Poem by Alicia™
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Slowly, surely.

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Slowly,
I feel you getting beneath
My skin,
Slowly, surely.

I feel myself smile
Every time I see you,
And every time you look at me
Though I try my best
Not to.

You’re making me
Wish I could love you,
But I can’t;
No; I can’t fall in love this way,
Not again.

My heart would break
Over and over
Without a doubt
And this time,
I wouldn’t come out
In one piece,
And this would be inevitable.

But still,
I wish I could love you.

© 2010 Alicia™



Author's Note

Alicia™
Wouldn't say I did much editing, but I just have to post it. Hope you like it anyways...

I've had this poem stuck in me for a very long time, but somehow I could never get it out the right way. All my previous attempts failed miserably, but I think this is somewhat good.

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Yes I understand the reason over temptation factor and it's so true.You just want to fall in love but you know it's not going to be okay later.Better leave before being left.This feeling is just the worst in the world and I'm living in this at the moment.Thanks it's very well written and very relevant

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Yes I understand the reason over temptation factor and it's so true.You just want to fall in love but you know it's not going to be okay later.Better leave before being left.This feeling is just the worst in the world and I'm living in this at the moment.Thanks it's very well written and very relevant

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great poem! Wishing you could love again after being hurt, Well written!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a nice poem

Posted 6 Years Ago


this is a fabulous poem, it is so sweet

Posted 7 Years Ago


I really liked this. I could relate so much to it, and I thought that you did an incredible job in finding the right words to say what it is that you were feeling. In a way, there were moments where I kind of wanted you to go deeper into the situation and expand on particular emotions, however, I did like the simple execution of your poem. Great work,
~PaperHearts

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You conveyed your feelings really well through this piece. Well written and true. I could feel how you felt through this poem. Nice job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I'm going through this right now :(

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is a great poem, and a lot of people faced something like this before. It's a horrible feeling to want to love someone yet you know if you let them in they'll end up breaking you. Well done:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know excately how you feel,
this happened to me once,
you spoke the truth.
good job with the words choice. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this one. Amazing words, keep on writing huns :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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