Zoems

Allow me to be the Lost of all your years.

I'm the lost of you.

Yes YOU!

It's true.

Allow me to be your missing truth

Like you're my missing rib.

Let me Sin,

Please my dear,

I'm Sincere.

My blues were never broken

Just bruises you took for misfortunes.

Panda Express cookies,

Not quite destiny,

But I keep on loving you...

No clues for the Treasure Island

My heart was a token.

The Hook to your Neverland,

But that didn't Pan out.

No help.

No formula for the potion

Just Voila

Like a prayer to God.

I was handed the scripture,

Which lead to her worship.

No poems written

Just soul smitten.

Smitten...

Love the light,

But driven to be alone.

Call that insight.

Who's he?

The new guy.

The nice guy.

The I don't give a f**k type,

But I'm bright,

So I bite

My tongue

With all my might.

I'm high

And I'm enjoying

My high.

Lead my way

through the night.

Lead my way

through the bright.

Lead my way

Outside the

Wrong and right.

Reviews

[Jesus & Gypsy Soul]

"My blues were never broken
Just bruises you took for misfortunes."

"The Hook to your Neverland- but that just didn't Pan out."

This poem reads so easily and beautifully, I am curious how natural this one came to you. I absolutely love this one!

[sinNsincerity]

Not natural at all, more like supernatural! Almost like a possession unexplainable feelings, thoughtso, and something I've yet to discover... To be honest, I never wanted to be a writer. I was on my way to be a chef when something inside or above me to me to stop everything I was do in life and to just start writing about whatever. It's hard to explain, I have basically dropped a life that I believed I was supposed to lead and have taken on writing full time. I don't even know why, but it feels so right. It's not like I sit down and say, "okay, imma write one this topic," something greater than I "God" I believe commands me to do so when the moment is right. Idk, I stop ask why and how and just do it....

[Pink Pastel]

It's long but very sincere and true.
You really have good deep feelings nice

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Melissa.

[Pink Pastel]

Ur welcome ur poems are really great^-^

[wordman]

well you painted a great image here my friend,loved it

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Sir, I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

[PhoenixDown]

Goddamn I love this.... Your talk of opposites & halves, & implications of "whole" & even further beyond ("outside") is universally awesome. Taking what lurks down here... and turning it into something of beauty through abstract technique & measures ---- an artist.

Striking, glorious.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you, I've been working hard on it.

[GalaxyGhost]

Sin in sincerity, good in goodbye, lie in life, art in earth, parent in apparently. There is so much more in many things and just like this cool poem, so much more is in it that is hidden.

[sinNsincerity]

Words in Swords... hehe

[GalaxyGhost]

Good one! End in friends, age in language...

[Elmarie]

I enjoyed your poem. This is a great journey. I feel so many things go unsaid and those are the ones we regret the most. Yet as you said "No formula for the potion" my favorite line from this piece.

Blessings

El

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Elmarie, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[Shabeeh Haider]

When you are in love you want to be the other persons missing piece. You need to be so indispensable that they need you to feel complete.....but somehow things do not always work out that way.
Very well written.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Shabeeh!