Her Vail

Her Vail

A Poem by sinNsincerity

The moon calls down to me.

Your Majesty.

Are you mad at me?

What's the cause for this summoning?

She has done more than

Swept me off my feet.

A Love catastrophe,

But not a travesty.

What a feat...

She lures the water from within.

Outer-body.

I'm out of my body.

Are you the existence of my sin?

The 9 over my 6.

~Astrology~

Astromancer.

My Cancer.

Two Crescents,

But is it you

That'll make me full?

So I close my eyes

To see if I'm alive.

I need you to reply!

Do I need to die

To find the truth that

Lies in your lies?

My most pleasant high.

Hard to believe in

That you are hard to believe in.

The reason why my heart is bleeding.

I have a need for more,

But I don't need you anymore.

War in

Days of

Yesterdays.

You left me far behind the sun's rays.



© 2017 sinNsincerity



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I identify with so many aspects of this. It seems to be uniquely crafted. (I read quite a bit on in the site. More often than not, if I have no constructive criticism, or praise then, I don't leave a review at all)
This was a nice change of pase for me. I found the twists within such a short amount of writing, impressive and refreshing. There is a other worldly romance, mixed with a bit of a seductive tango. In the small amount of lines used, the imagery was conveyed vividly and beautifully. Personally, I feel like that is what your standard poetry is about. Conveying and demonstrating as much feeling as possible through the use of carefully orchestrated phrases.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
♤BE♤

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Weeks Ago

'Twas my pleasure Barefoot Empress.



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This was so wonderfully written !!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Months Ago

Thank you Pia, always a pleasure.
Very unique! I love the crescents becoming the whole eye. Beautiful

Posted 1 Year Ago


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sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Thank you for thinking so Courtney!
"~Astrology~
Astromancer.
My Cancer.
Two Crescents,
But is it you
That'll make me full?"

I enjoyed the lunar references and the astrological feel. Well penned, David!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Thank you Kelly, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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