Her Vail

Her Vail

A Poem by sinNsincerity

The moon calls down to me.

Your Majesty.

Are you mad at me?

What's the cause for this summoning?

She has done more than

Swept me off my feet.

A Love catastrophe,

But not a travesty.

What a feat...

She lures the water from within.

Outer-body.

I'm out of my body.

Are you the existence of my sin?

The 9 over my 6.

~Astrology~

Astromancer.

My Cancer.

Two Crescents,

But is it you

That'll make me full?

So I close my eyes

To see if I'm alive.

I need you to reply!

Do I need to die

To find the truth that

Lies in your lies?

My most pleasant high.

Hard to believe in

That you are hard to believe in.

The reason why my heart is bleeding.

I have a need for more,

But I don't need you anymore.

War in

Days of

Yesterdays.

You left me far behind the sun's rays.



© 2017 sinNsincerity



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stream of thought associations raising conflicted thought and emotion ..what loftier comedy than love to be able to summon such confusion ;) i looked up the definition of Vale to be sure ... vale, veil, vail ... such an array .. what a heart break in closing ..hope your hero survives to love again :{
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sinNsincerity

1 Month Ago

I Hope i do as Wellllll



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This was so wonderfully written !!!

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sinNsincerity

1 Month Ago

Thank you Pia, always a pleasure.
Very unique! I love the crescents becoming the whole eye. Beautiful

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sinNsincerity

5 Months Ago

Thank you for thinking so Courtney!
"~Astrology~
Astromancer.
My Cancer.
Two Crescents,
But is it you
That'll make me full?"

I enjoyed the lunar references and the astrological feel. Well penned, David!

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sinNsincerity

5 Months Ago

Thank you Kelly, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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