Tell Me With Your Eyes

Tell Me With Your Eyes

A Poem by TadKent
"

Just one more song in the TK collection.

"

 

Tell me one thing

I don't know about you.

I'll give you a list of things

you know I'd do for you

 

So cross your fingers

and we'll pretend

Everything is alright, because

Silence is your new best friend

 

Talk to me,

Tell me what I already know

You're thinking.

Look at me,

Tell me with your eyes

Are you listiening?

 

Girl I swear,

I thought I knew you better than this

It's so unfair,

Now what we all had seems so pointless

 

Oh I promise I won't bite.

I guess you're scared I just might

Lean in

whisper something in your ear,

maybe that song of hope

you don't want to hear,

That's too bad

 

Talk to me,

Tell me what I already know

You're thinking

Look at me

Tell me with your eyes

Are you listening?

 

That look you give me makes me

S-s-s-stutter

Instead of glaring won't you

Help me make this

B-b-b-better now,

Oh I promise it'll be worth it.

We all had so much,

don't make me forget it.

 

Talk to me,

Tell me what I already know

You're thinking....


© 2010 TadKent



Author's Note

TadKent
Want to hear it? go here: http://www.myspace.com/thetadkentproject . You don't have to be a myspace member, just click it. Scroll down, and it's the video on the right. :)

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Featured Review

cute lyrics. And I LOVE that the Frames are your numero uno on myspace. =) You're a very talented writer. For once, I have no critique in a review... feels strange. lol. I would mention the rhythm, but I know it goes with the music, so... yep. I enjoyed reading. A lot. =)
KH

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Reviews

Girl I swear,

I thought I knew you better than this

It's so unfair,

Now what we all had seems so pointless

I specially love this part, love your choice of words.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Very nice, and i like how you sounded out the letters towards the end on the words stutter and better. I don't see many do that. I like this, especially the title.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wow these are some deep lyrics. Love it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Totally dig this! The flow is really great, I could easily see it transcribe into a song. Legit!

Posted 6 Years Ago


oh. my bad then. you're talented! ^^

Posted 7 Years Ago


haha did you get inspired by maroon 5's song?

Posted 7 Years Ago


This was incredible...You have a lot of talent!! I enjoyed this and thought that the subject matter and the lyrics were incredible.

xxoxx

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sometimes words are not what people need to say in order for one to be able to hear them. I love the way you made that apparent in these lyrics. I will definitely check out the video sometime :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Beautiful words, as always~

Posted 7 Years Ago


Aw I loved the lyrics! I liked the mood it vibrates ,good job! Keep on writing!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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TadKent
TadKent

Fresno, CA



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