Are You?

You know who you are.

Can it be? 

Are you here? 

Can you see my hidden tear? 

Please be real, not a fake, 

Are you here to help me make,

 The pain and hurt ebb slightly down, 

can you see my upturned frown?

 Please be who I hope you are, 

One who sees past the barr, 

I have placed before my heart,

 To protect, from the part,

 Of this worled, that evil dwells,

 And keeps them under dark cold spells, 

Please help me to overcome, 

The memories, 

That Kill me slowly.

Author's Note

This was made in 10 mins

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You did very well. The poem left the reader with something to think about.
"Please help me to overcome,
The memories,
That Kill me slowly."
To make regret and sadness go away. Need self-forgiveness and a kind friend. Thank you Taz for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Taz]

Thank You.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Taz.

[Shasha]

Poetry is such a thing which connects you to yourself and your thoughts and it did. It's really very beautiful. And it's not a easy task to create a poem in 10 minutes, but you did, and such a nice poem. Well done and keep writing!!!

[Taz]

Thank you very much, I plan on it.

[Shasha]

You know, you write amazing!

[Taz]

I really just think I am average, I am no Jane Austen.

[Shasha]

But who knows one day! There is always a scope of improvement. But you write well. More than average.

[Taz]

Thank You for your encouragement.

[Shasha]

It's all right! Good poems will always be good.

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For me very haunted piece. Honest words about personal fears. Form have also very nice flow. well done.

[Taz]

I made it for a very special friend.

[Surya]

It's truly emotical beauty, I liked it..

[Taz]

Thank you for your feedback.

[Daphnee]

Beautiful. Pure beauty. Love it.

[Taz]

Thank you so much.