Tea Party

Tea Party

A Poem by ThisVivian


There was once a little pleasant boating party,
with a bunch of neighbors meeting up to chatter.
While sitting outside, they each spoke up heartily,
about how their lives were going about any matter!

While everyone were chatting in engaging gossip,
they all drank either delightful tea or wine as well.
Each cup was so sweet, almost as a  precious blossom,
because various chalices each had a delightful smell!

That get-together was unquestionably very lively,
since anyone who was on that boat spoke sweetly.
All of the people idolized the celebration brightly,
so each had their behaviors to accompany neatly!

© 2017 ThisVivian


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you're a great storyteller. The idea of prose in poetry is quite unique. You kept the reader going.
Thank you for sharing:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ThisVivian

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much~! :D
Oh wow! I totally enjoyed this write so much,
such lovely imagery. Rhyme scheme is wonderful as well. awesome

Posted 6 Years Ago


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ThisVivian

6 Years Ago

Thank you lots~! :D
Loved yours I wrote a tea party one last month too good poem like yours

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ThisVivian

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much~! :D

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Added on June 30, 2017
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ThisVivian
ThisVivian

San Jose, CA



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I am a 23 year old author, who loves to write and edit poetry/stories. I tend to keep my poems with 100 words. (I keep my username as "ThisVivian" for other websites as well.) more..

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