(no one has to know)

(no one has to know)

A Poem by Titan
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A short poem asking what a person would be willing to do if no one was watching. Would true feelings come out?

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(no one has to know)



If I cornered you in the abandoned bathroom,

would you kiss me?

 

If I locked all the exits and turned out the lights,

would you kiss me?

 

If I claimed to be another,

would you kiss me?

 

If time froze for one moment,

would you kiss me?

 

If our lives wouldn’t change,

would you kiss me?

 

If I kissed you,

 

would you kiss me?


© 2010 Titan



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Wow, this is so raw and direct, un-shy. Awesome poem. =)

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like this poem. The question is direct and to the point. The flow of words moved with a good movement. I like the ending. A excellent poem.

Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


I Really Liked This Poem :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


that was cool especially the way it was diagonally.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love it. I probably would kiss someone who was that romantic.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I like your flourish with your words and way you have chosen to emphasise them.Also,your layout is pleasing, it seems to (might be wrong here) show a kinda of internal dialogue, like if your asking yourself.
All in all,good write. Xx

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Again, I like your fine touches with the words... also the secret atmosphere of this. nice nice!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Another good one. Again, really like the editing and how you make "would you kiss me?" pop out diagonally.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 23, 2010
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Tags: curiosity, trust, young love, desperation, poetry, coming out

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I'm just a teenager who writes about what he cannot express in words. Oh, and by the way, I'm gay. -- I am quite thankful for all the reviewers and readers. Never would I have thought that any .. more..

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