EXAM'S FRIGHT

ExAm'S FrIgHt

Returning from the party night

feeling a bit naughty right

threw my clothes here and there

as they were scattered every where

Party makes me so much tired

like a worker who was hired

so i fall down like a dead

with a pillow below my head

Woke up on my goosy bed

like an irritated angry lad

noticing it was a next day

the morning of the monday

The clock do the ticky ticks

wake me up sharp at six

i threw it down so hard

it sound thud hud thard

I was on my daily schedule

and was late for the school

so; had a feathery breakfast

took the shortest track so fast

As i reached to the school

it was the day to be a final fool

since we partied all the night 

got no time to study tight

My heart beat fasten

and body sweatens 

opened my eyes so bright

actually it was the EXAM'S FRIGHT

As i looked at the clock 

which gives me a little shock

its still clocking 1 am 

but reminds me about 8 pm

I lie down brave 

on my goosy grave

with my eyes close and shut 
waiting for another cut.

~utkarsh singh

Author's Note

guyz my frst poem ..plz ignore silly mistakes.....

Reviews

[Thea]

This was entertaining. I remembered a friend who experienced the same thing. Hahaha. Must be really hard. I actually like the topic you have in here. However, the rhyme appeared rather forced. I'm sure you can do better with your vocabulary. Nonetheless, I enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing. :)

[Utkarsh Singh]

it was my first poem ......try to understand ...you can check out my last poem " dream in my dream ".i think improvement is shown up there ....btw thanks for the review

[Thea]

I totally understand you, dear. As what I said, I know that you can do better. I was just trying to help you by noting an honest criticism. I personally liked this poem so don't worry about it. Keep writing.

[Penny]

Little silly.. but very fun write. Really nice.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

I liked how it just flowed together, simply amazing.

Kaze~

[Skai Rain]

A great poem, especially for your first one. I enjoyed it :)

[Kamari's]

I love the rhymes and I understand the feeling lol stayed up one night to finish two projects due the next day .

[Mary Ochoa]

It's like I just watched a movie that I found myself relating to me. Exams! Exams! The life a of a student right? haha Great write my friend! Simply enjoyed every line:) Thank you for sharing!

[Life Pal]

When your student you face this in life, exam fright.Enjoyed reading your poem.

[DKLaw]

I always say, we have to start somewhere. There is no cap on creativity or art. Good work.

[Ayushi]

Funny read .. Seems like it's a true story :p
Well written Utkarsh :)

[Matching Socks]

Fun read. I remember the exam fright. Terrible feeling.
But it all worked out.

It was fun to read your poem.

[Gurleen Saluja]

a good start of your writing career :)