~dance within the soul

~dance within the soul

A Poem by Frieda P

You dance within the soul,
             make it hum so sweetly
songs from a nectar'd god
   as hips sway to reach your moon
           swathing bodies in divine Ecstasy 
      dawn's light dims in comparison
 Aphrodite in whisper'd yearning,
            of Sappho's lyrical adulated whimsy
         took bittersweet allusion's breath away
 joyful recognition echo'd the skies's breezes 
      written on favor'd clouds of surrender
               mesmerized in your explosive eclipses
    enraptur'd frenzy of poetic inspiration
                
breathe you in as a summer's day rising
                             unrelenting abandon of all senses 

© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P
captcha ~ misword

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Listening to this wonderful music you chose and being mesmerized by the words you have written, thinking about the way Sappho wove galaxies into her love poems and with Aphrodite it was her look and touch... but neither of them could pull me into that swirling galactic center where I found a poem, an "enraptur'd frenzy of poetic inspiration" and a desire to dance...

WOW Frieda, wait a second I must catch my breath, sorry, I'm still floating toward the inner star as words continue to echo and inspire... WOW!!
~~redzone

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redzone

10 Years Ago

Captcha is full of bull crappy, no miswords here ;0)
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Wooo, you just put a huge smile on my face sir, grazie mille Curt! MWAH! x



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I love this piece, amazing write Frieda! xx

Kaze~ :-)

Posted 9 Years Ago


my soul - it can't dance. it can't even whistle. But this poem....lovely

Posted 9 Years Ago


I have a sudden strange urge to take dancing lessons

Posted 9 Years Ago


Absolutely love it. Beautiful, romantic, original and sensual. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Grazie mille Pat, glad you thought so :)
Mythology, no way! Mama F - You have officially rendered me speechless to the point where I have no words to tell you about how utterly breathtaking and amazing this is!! WOWEEEE!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Ha I know, I shocked myself, I think Benji is rubbing off on moi! Thanks muchly noodlebumble! x
Your imagery`s very beautiful, Frieda. You write with the heart.Words magnificence`s on the neath of love but at the same time, the love`s under the neath of magnificent love... means "Amazing Art" .. Fantastic write! ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Woo thanks for such a glowing review Wordsmith, muchly appreciated. :)
Whoo! Love the reference to mythology and the feeling of movement your words convey. Nicely done, Frieda!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Grazie mille Rita!
What is your zodiac sign? i love the earthly welcome in this poem when you state "songs from a nectar'd god
as hips sway to reach your moon".

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much Kleio, I'm a Leo, why? RAWR! ;)
Kleio13

9 Years Ago

hahahaha no wonder! Your poems are ambitious.
unrelenting abandon of all senses....... ooohh baby .... I need to read no further ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Wooo go for it Betty, thanks muchly! ;) xo

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