~dance within the soul

~dance within the soul

A Poem by Frieda P

You dance within the soul,
             make it hum so sweetly
songs from a nectar'd god
   as hips sway to reach your moon
           swathing bodies in divine Ecstasy 
      dawn's light dims in comparison
 Aphrodite in whisper'd yearning,
            of Sappho's lyrical adulated whimsy
         took bittersweet allusion's breath away
 joyful recognition echo'd the skies's breezes 
      written on favor'd clouds of surrender
               mesmerized in your explosive eclipses
    enraptur'd frenzy of poetic inspiration
                
breathe you in as a summer's day rising
                             unrelenting abandon of all senses 

© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P
captcha ~ misword

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Listening to this wonderful music you chose and being mesmerized by the words you have written, thinking about the way Sappho wove galaxies into her love poems and with Aphrodite it was her look and touch... but neither of them could pull me into that swirling galactic center where I found a poem, an "enraptur'd frenzy of poetic inspiration" and a desire to dance...

WOW Frieda, wait a second I must catch my breath, sorry, I'm still floating toward the inner star as words continue to echo and inspire... WOW!!
~~redzone

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redzone

10 Years Ago

Captcha is full of bull crappy, no miswords here ;0)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Wooo, you just put a huge smile on my face sir, grazie mille Curt! MWAH! x



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Oh wow beautiful Magical and Elegant my friend.


Thank you for sharing this Tender piece.


I love the music so very peaceful very nice.



I loved these stanza's lines here.



of Sappho's lyrical adulated whimsy

took bittersweet allusion's breath away

joyful recognition echo'd the skies's breezes

written on favor'd clouds of surrender

mesmerized in your explosive eclipses

enraptur'd frenzy of poetic inspiration

breathe you in as a summer's day rising

unrelenting abandon of all senses




Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

You're very welcome. I do Enjoy reading your work my friend you Surprise me with something different.. read more
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks again, I surprise myself most times, never know which direction that ink is going to flow....
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Tell me about it I have a new love poem I did half of last night that popped into my head when I was.. read more
like how this comes together I can see the inner soul. ty for sharing

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Grazie mille Mauricio...
That sounds like a night not only to remember but to judge all others by

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Tate, perhaps....
Listening to this wonderful music you chose and being mesmerized by the words you have written, thinking about the way Sappho wove galaxies into her love poems and with Aphrodite it was her look and touch... but neither of them could pull me into that swirling galactic center where I found a poem, an "enraptur'd frenzy of poetic inspiration" and a desire to dance...

WOW Frieda, wait a second I must catch my breath, sorry, I'm still floating toward the inner star as words continue to echo and inspire... WOW!!
~~redzone

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redzone

10 Years Ago

Captcha is full of bull crappy, no miswords here ;0)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Wooo, you just put a huge smile on my face sir, grazie mille Curt! MWAH! x
You dance within the soul....
wow..Frieda...this is lovely
Soft and sensual with an elegance that is "you".
Gorgeous poetry lovely lady!

:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

What a sweet thing to say, thanks so much Julie! :)
the imagery is spellbinding. i loved this a lot, great job!
-GS

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much GS!
I am always tickled when you reference a mythical character Mrs.R ;) On the other hand, I figured it was only a matter of time before Sappho surfaced in your poetry...this is incredibly hypnotic and sensual...as usual I am reduced to short succinct comments whenever I'm exposed to the grandeur of your words, especially when you start talking about dancing :) xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

You must be rubbing off on me, next thing you know I'll be writing about Dali ;) xo
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Haha I don't know, I've seen him peek into your words on occasion ;) xo
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

* see remark above ;) x
Id like to dance within my soul...maybe im listening to the wrong music lately. Lovely words here...you are such a wonderful master of feelings in poetic form. My favorite poet...but I guess I'm biased.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Awh thanks so much Red...muchly appreciate the sentiment. xo
Your effervescent soul danced with a pen in hand across this page enchanting the reader in a sensual, seductive way.. nice girl.. sheesh..

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

10 Years Ago

My pleasure ma'am. (and thank goodness, only fair)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Sometimes there are expletives too haha
AprilRN1210

10 Years Ago

now that's what I aim for:)

working on one now that makes me blush....lol

This one is sweetly seductive, like a hot dance floor and a tempting, aching beat. Awesome write, my friend!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Star, your review is awesome! :) I'm doing the happy dance now my friend....

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