~dance within the soul

~dance within the soul

A Poem by Frieda P

You dance within the soul,
             make it hum so sweetly
songs from a nectar'd god
   as hips sway to reach your moon
           swathing bodies in divine Ecstasy 
      dawn's light dims in comparison
 Aphrodite in whisper'd yearning,
            of Sappho's lyrical adulated whimsy
         took bittersweet allusion's breath away
 joyful recognition echo'd the skies's breezes 
      written on favor'd clouds of surrender
               mesmerized in your explosive eclipses
    enraptur'd frenzy of poetic inspiration
                
breathe you in as a summer's day rising
                             unrelenting abandon of all senses 

© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P
captcha ~ misword

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Listening to this wonderful music you chose and being mesmerized by the words you have written, thinking about the way Sappho wove galaxies into her love poems and with Aphrodite it was her look and touch... but neither of them could pull me into that swirling galactic center where I found a poem, an "enraptur'd frenzy of poetic inspiration" and a desire to dance...

WOW Frieda, wait a second I must catch my breath, sorry, I'm still floating toward the inner star as words continue to echo and inspire... WOW!!
~~redzone

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redzone

10 Years Ago

Captcha is full of bull crappy, no miswords here ;0)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Wooo, you just put a huge smile on my face sir, grazie mille Curt! MWAH! x



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After reacing your work I always dance within my soul:) great write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Awh you're a sweetheart A!! Grazie mille....x
silky, satin, romantic, and delicious

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Woo thanks so much Streamline....
I love the slow easy graceful pace of this.
Your words are so charming and sensual.
I'm never disappointed when I stop in to visit. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Sweet of you to say Ance, thanks muchly :)
What an enchanting dance it is… a soulfully captivating poem Moonbeam.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ooh I got an 'enchanting' and 'captivating' two of my favorite words, thanks muchly Dale.
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Why you are welcome, and they are well deserved words. The cowboy has delievered.
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Pax
This is how we dance between words with poetic beauty... how to seduce your reader to dance and feel the good feeling or the words, in ecstatic driven emotion... then inspiration runs through and create beauty! Beautiful as always my good friend...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Exactly Pax, thanks so much my sweet friend...
Pax

10 Years Ago

welcome :) smiles from miles away.........
Your words are a spell creating charming distinct dream sequences. This one takes me up and away soaring into this video you used to help set the stage. I just close my eyes...after reading of course and let the music of your words take me there, so gorgeous.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Awh you humble me dahlin'....thanks muchly!
Shirlena

10 Years Ago

and you truly slay me with your words lovely :)
Steamy, sensual, and romantic, this is another lovely sexy poem by Frieda -- can I get some of that gooey stuff? I seem to be in short supply as of late ... lol.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ha it comes and goes, and no way, you keep writing your scathing stuff, it's the best!!
Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

ya, I guess I don't wear the sap well.
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Sap is overrated....if I start reading greeting card stuff from you, I'll have a conniption ;)

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