~dance within the soul

You dance within the soul,

             make it hum so sweetly

songs from a nectar'd god

   as hips sway to reach your moon

           swathing bodies in divine Ecstasy 

      dawn's light dims in comparison

 Aphrodite in whisper'd yearning,

            of Sappho's lyrical adulated whimsy

         took bittersweet allusion's breath away

 joyful recognition echo'd the skies's breezes 

      written on favor'd clouds of surrender

               mesmerized in your explosive eclipses

    enraptur'd frenzy of poetic inspiration

                

breathe you in as a summer's day rising

                             unrelenting abandon of all senses 

Author's Note

captcha ~ misword

Reviews

[redzone]

Listening to this wonderful music you chose and being mesmerized by the words you have written, thinking about the way Sappho wove galaxies into her love poems and with Aphrodite it was her look and touch... but neither of them could pull me into that swirling galactic center where I found a poem, an "enraptur'd frenzy of poetic inspiration" and a desire to dance...

WOW Frieda, wait a second I must catch my breath, sorry, I'm still floating toward the inner star as words continue to echo and inspire... WOW!!
~~redzone

[redzone]

Captcha is full of bull crappy, no miswords here ;0)

[Frieda P]

Wooo, you just put a huge smile on my face sir, grazie mille Curt! MWAH! x

[A. Amos]

After reacing your work I always dance within my soul:) great write!

[Frieda P]

Awh you're a sweetheart A!! Grazie mille....x

[Cory Barrett]

silky, satin, romantic, and delicious

[Frieda P]

Woo thanks so much Streamline....

[Matching Socks]

I love the slow easy graceful pace of this.
Your words are so charming and sensual.
I'm never disappointed when I stop in to visit. :)

[Frieda P]

Sweet of you to say Ance, thanks muchly :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

What an enchanting dance it is… a soulfully captivating poem Moonbeam.

[Frieda P]

Ooh I got an 'enchanting' and 'captivating' two of my favorite words, thanks muchly Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why you are welcome, and they are well deserved words. The cowboy has delievered.

[Pax]

This is how we dance between words with poetic beauty... how to seduce your reader to dance and feel the good feeling or the words, in ecstatic driven emotion... then inspiration runs through and create beauty! Beautiful as always my good friend...

[Frieda P]

Exactly Pax, thanks so much my sweet friend...

[Pax]

welcome :) smiles from miles away.........

[Shirlena]

Your words are a spell creating charming distinct dream sequences. This one takes me up and away soaring into this video you used to help set the stage. I just close my eyes...after reading of course and let the music of your words take me there, so gorgeous.

[Frieda P]

Awh you humble me dahlin'....thanks muchly!

[Shirlena]

and you truly slay me with your words lovely :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Steamy, sensual, and romantic, this is another lovely sexy poem by Frieda -- can I get some of that gooey stuff? I seem to be in short supply as of late ... lol.

[Frieda P]

Ha it comes and goes, and no way, you keep writing your scathing stuff, it's the best!!

[Lyn Anderson]

ya, I guess I don't wear the sap well.

[Frieda P]

Sap is overrated....if I start reading greeting card stuff from you, I'll have a conniption ;)