~dance within the soul

~dance within the soul

A Poem by Frieda P

You dance within the soul,
             make it hum so sweetly
songs from a nectar'd god
   as hips sway to reach your moon
           swathing bodies in divine Ecstasy 
      dawn's light dims in comparison
 Aphrodite in whisper'd yearning,
            of Sappho's lyrical adulated whimsy
         took bittersweet allusion's breath away
 joyful recognition echo'd the skies's breezes 
      written on favor'd clouds of surrender
               mesmerized in your explosive eclipses
    enraptur'd frenzy of poetic inspiration
                
breathe you in as a summer's day rising
                             unrelenting abandon of all senses 

© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P
captcha ~ misword

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Listening to this wonderful music you chose and being mesmerized by the words you have written, thinking about the way Sappho wove galaxies into her love poems and with Aphrodite it was her look and touch... but neither of them could pull me into that swirling galactic center where I found a poem, an "enraptur'd frenzy of poetic inspiration" and a desire to dance...

WOW Frieda, wait a second I must catch my breath, sorry, I'm still floating toward the inner star as words continue to echo and inspire... WOW!!
~~redzone

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redzone

10 Years Ago

Captcha is full of bull crappy, no miswords here ;0)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Wooo, you just put a huge smile on my face sir, grazie mille Curt! MWAH! x



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Beautiful words flowing into verse..dances..!!

Scotty
xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Scotty!!
You paint so many pictures with your magic pen Chica.Truly beautiful :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Grazie mille pazzo :) x
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome chica :)
A amazing poem. I like the energy and the movement of the words. Good to dance freely in the palm of Nature. I had to read again. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Always dancing, thanks John...
This was an absolute dream to read Frieda.

Regards
Troy

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

You brought a smile to my heart dear Troy, thanks so much.
amazing and beautiful Frieda, this one is one of your best

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Wow thanks so much Latifa, muchly appreciated...
I agree with Shirlena! I felt like I was under a spell reading this one! Brilliant job with this! I love this line:

"mesmerized in your explosive eclipses"

Beautifully penned, my Frieda! xo :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks, so jazz'd you enjoyed this one Mads! :) xo
Hey girl, this is really penned right. I enjoyed reading

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Cassie, you've been missed married lady!
"mesmerized in your explosive eclipses
enraptur'd frenzy of poetic inspiration
breathe you in as a summer's day rising
unrelenting abandon of all senses "

Sensual, soothing and divine love.. Lovely :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ahh love 'divine'...thanks muchly :)
the muse certainly dances within your soul, Frieda...

"explosive eclipses" such phrasing...celestial poetry here.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

What a delightful thought jacob, thanks so much...
A sensual slow dance rather than your usual tango. Reads like a song you never want to end... Beautifully done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Sometimes you just have to s l o w it down, thanks muchly dear Scott.

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