Disappearing Act

Nights of silent horrors

Endless days in a chilly sun

Hope and sanity abandon her

A life of darkness she becomes

Blacker than black, and

Thick as molasses, it
        Coats the brain
Infects her thoughts
        Feeds the mind
Corrupts her soul
        Seeps into bone
Swallows her whole

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A lot of well thought beautiful lines... Thank you for sharing...

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

My pleasure, and thank you for the review.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Raven]

I cant even- Words fail me. As soon as I even read the title I knew that this would get to me. I know im in a fragile place, but still, you've said everything without being explicit and its wonderful.

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

Thank you so much

[Allycat]

Once again, your poems are very powerful! You have so much to say with few words. I love everything about this, especially the title you chose and the lines:
"Hope and sanity abandon her
A life of darkness she becomes
Blacker than black, and
Thick as molasses, it
Coats the brain"
Excellent write once again

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

Thank you so much, I really appreciate your reviews and feedback! :)

[Allycat]

no problem! Thank you for sharing :D