Like a blanket

Like a blanket

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
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just read it

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My baby covers
me
like a blanket
makes
me
feel
warm and fuzzy.
My baby kisses
me
like a kitten
soft and gentle.
My baby loves
me
like no one else
does.
Her words fill
my ears
and I love the light
in her eyes
when she tells
me
 she "loves me to the moon and back"
My baby loves
me
and I love her
till
forever never ends.





© 2016 Lyn Anderson



Author's Note

Lyn Anderson
this is NOT a google or other internet stock image.

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I dig all of this KL, the repetition the playful tone the way you describe her and how she makes you feel.
'Till forever never ends'....yeah that's the business right there! A little like sneaking into my heart. Wish I could hug you I like this so much xo

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

aww thanks. I feel the hug. My little ones are so precious to me. I am blessed, and I know it. No ma.. read more
aLittlePain

1 Year Ago

That sentiment is amplified in your writing, I deeply admire that and you!
okay, read it; liked it and it is way nice to love until forever ends...

redzone

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

Thanks I appreciate it.
The love here is powerful! Makes me wanna snuggle with my baby girl!
~Claire

Posted 3 Years Ago


The first four lines stumble, a word missing me thinks. But it recovers to be another interesting and charming piece.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

I missed the ME - I saw it in my head, I swear I did! Hurray for me trusty proofreader!
John Alexander McFadyen

3 Years Ago

Makes me wonder if others really bother reading at all?
A great and lovely poem for a daughter perhaps . Soft and gentle love...Bravo.................

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Lyn Anderson
Lyn Anderson

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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