Your Dream's Desire

This woman whose beauty would make God weep

The light of my world

Rebecca

I would give to you my smile

that sauntered look and walk

A long mellow daydreamed breeze

that cute look each time we talk

 

I would give to you the sunshine

a kind windy sun flowered field

Hopes to fill your hearts desire

with any dream your mind could

 wield

 

I would give to you the warm rain

sweet songs the whippoorwills sing

The eternal stars of the night

for you I would give everything

 

Author's Note

It is always the inner hope striven for throughout our lives that at one time our dreams will intersect with our reality. Such has been my own experience these last 4 years. A life spent alongside the one you love gives the meaning and purpose so sought for and desired. Happy Anniversary Becky!
Tate

Reviews

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Tate,

I have been reading your poetry for years. I have listened to the music that you've included with the poetry. I alway turn that off because I want to hear the true you without coloration. I want to hear the words. This piece was different. The music fit. It was an extension. The words were pure. I think this is your finest poem. I have read the poems about your son, and that emotion is so pure. I have read poems about your experiences, again always so pure. But here I see your heart, My Friend. It is so inescapable. You can't hide here, not even a little piece of you. It's all out there. Here is your consuming love. I read this and dropped my head because I am so glad that you have such an all-consuming love. Give your Lady a kiss from me. She is special and has won undying love from a romantic soul. I hope she appreciates the treasure. I suspect that she does, and she does have those penetrating blue eyes.

Greatest respect, and the highest marks!

A devoted Friend,

Rick

[Tate Morgan]

This may be the greatest review i ever received. I read it and in so doing was bestowed the greatest feeling of appreciation and honor. I thank you I am truly humbled
Your friend
Tate

[Rick Puetter]

Very simple, Tate! You are welcome, and I was honored to read such a pure and untarnished poem. A truly fine work.

[Acucena G.]

You are a fantastic writer/poet , in this poem you just prove that you are more than fantastic, you are excellent

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Whatever I am is eclipsed by my sweet wife.

[Acucena G.]

You are welcome, and I also thank her for inspiring you

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

This is fabulously romantic...and honest. I never miss the honesty in your work, which is always so masteful that I scarcely feel the need to really "review" anything except for the way that it made me feel. This made me feel hopeful...that true love does exisit.

[Tate Morgan]

True love is the key does it make you feel like you did on your first night with the one you first fell in love with? If so I accomplished the thought in question

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I can sense the feeling...it does. Sadly, the love you write about is something that not all of us have had the pleasure of recieving in our lives. I strive to be what is written in this piece, my friend.

[Tate Morgan]

You will find the man worthy of your love someday and he will honor your feelings with his praise

[Ivory]

A lovely piece of poetry.. I can feel the love in each line ; )

[Tate Morgan]

thank you very much

[Ezequiel Esquibal]

A beautiful poem for what surely must be a very beautiful person.

The kind of romantic love that's the stuff of dreams!

[BlackRose]

Pure love at it's finest or so beyond. Romance is in the air. It's so wonderful or spectacular when one finds the love of their life and can show it or as you did here. Also gets me thinking of the one I love so dearly and deeply. Was a pleasure and a 'lovely' read.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you it has been a long time since last I heard from you Thank you

[BlackRose]

Yes, it has. I come once in awhile. When life takes over sometimes or the mind drifts to other things for that time, just happens to the best of us. But I don't forget and always do find my way back here or other, lol. And your very welcome.

[Tate Morgan]

You are always welcome here

[BlackRose]

Thanks ever so much, and well do know or I wouldn't still be here. :o) And your always welcome too.

[Tate Morgan]

thank you

[Rhianne Ney]

That sure is a great thing to have, to love and be loved. i'm sure the person which you dedicate this to will be flattered (:

[R. L. Ives]

I had once read that to write well you had to write what you know. You know love, plain and simple. The kind of love that makes one know beyond a doubt that they are with their soul's mate. Thank you for sharing that with us.

[gcp]

From the the heart :)

[Maria.F.T]

what a sweet taste of a poem

[Summer]

I really enjoyed reading your poem, as it kind of reminded me of what true love is. It was a really heartwarming poem and could feel the emotions. I hope to read more from you.