warda...

warda...

A Story by bluessadmood
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never thought such misery would run free on earth and not one ever interested.. what to say

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Warda was so proud of herself,she was almost 18 y,her dreams were always high
she never thought one day anything will stop her dreams,where seems they
just will never end..
she lived with mother and father ,in a sweet home,home was small,but was like heaven
she was good at everything after school,she would visit some friends,she loved acting done some plays on local stage ,she would bewilder her friends with the way would do her role
like naturally born actress..yes she even would sing ,once she starts the lyrics and words
would stun everyone..seems no end to her ambitions ,and pride..
yes she was so proud she got all those talents..one day i will be a star,she thought
and she loved a young boy,he was so good looking but so different,he was amazed at her
vitality,what free will and high hopes she got ,he thought..he would just bring her news
how thing are going so bad,lots of killing every day..
she just dismissed it all,she was so reactive to what sufferings she heard about..
it was just a way to deter her thoughts,to never think a lot,or everything will just
fade away ,dreams and hopes she kept building on..suddenly she turned around
was it a dream ,ohh no.. she was some hundreds of miles away,where her father smuggled them at night after a very heavy bombing near their house..now they stand in a wilderness on the border with a different country among lot others misery waiting to cross the border
even here she was optimistic there must be a way to keep on her dreams,maybe in
that other country things would be easier,be a star one day ,she dreamed,so proud
a man looked like a refugee worker,came closer ,he just seemed bewildered at those
green dreamy eyes,still filled with so much faith and strength,he must have thought
she was in kind of shock..for looking at everything,who would stand so erect,and strong
and proud where all were so miserable and shamed and hungry just looking for a place
to lie and if lucky even die in peace..but this girl was different,she was like lost,and smiling
he handed he a sandwich and some water,the poor thing was like shivering though it never showed on her face..it was like a hit on the head... she saw whats offering,she just could not pull herself together, not anymore,like suddenly she knew whats happening ,how proud she was,she was but no more
and she gave in to some hysterical cries,and started sobbing,tears would never stop
yes she told him ,hardly the words flowing..yes i am hungry starving ,and dying
dreams are dying,but i wanted to be a star one day..that day will never come,now i know....


© 2017 bluessadmood



Author's Note

bluessadmood
i read a lot all through literature,from all over the world, poked into tragedies done by humans,all through history,i never heard of anything like whats going on there..syria

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This is a remarkable piece of writing. You have captured the story of a million, billion, god-knows-how-many young people. You have brought their tragedies to be in my heart and before my eyes. I feel a lump in my throat and I am tearful. Keep writing, dear friend. You are speaking truth in such a way that no one can deny it. Thank you.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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bluessadmood

2 Years Ago

its humanity how i am puzzled how people could behave and be so rotten,cruelty sometimes i am astoun.. read more



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This is a remarkable piece of writing. You have captured the story of a million, billion, god-knows-how-many young people. You have brought their tragedies to be in my heart and before my eyes. I feel a lump in my throat and I am tearful. Keep writing, dear friend. You are speaking truth in such a way that no one can deny it. Thank you.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

2 Years Ago

its humanity how i am puzzled how people could behave and be so rotten,cruelty sometimes i am astoun.. read more
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This made me feel sad and maybe a little angry as well. I feel a well of sadness for the girl who has had her dreams ripped away my the harshness of the world she lives.And angry because such inhumanity exists in our world. I know that place where all you have is dreams standing between you and the abyss. If you could tighten up your prose and narrowyour discriptors, this would be awesome.

Posted 3 Years Ago


I really like your writing its very unique and you know how to capture your readers. I really enjoyed reading this story and just want to say keep up the good. I hope you don't mind when you get the time if you could read one of my stories and give me you advice and rating. I appreciate it especially coming from a great writer like you:) thank you.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Our prayers are with syria and peace in the whole world. One sometimes becomes speechless at he world's cruelty. Wonderful effective write

Posted 3 Years Ago


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bluessadmood

3 Years Ago

thank you dear,what a tragedy.
I feel great sadness for Syria. One of our young writers wrote of her escape. She saw people being killed and murder as her family escaped to Turkey. I don't understand brother killing brother. The story is sad. No child should lose hope or dreams. I pray for a better world. I pray the madman go away. Thank you for sharing the powerful and sad story.
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Posted 3 Years Ago


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bluessadmood

3 Years Ago

still you missed my friend,if you look well into it,its the whole world again fighting using differe.. read more
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I have many friends still who work in Washington. Too many cooks in the kitchen will create a mess. .. read more
bluessadmood

3 Years Ago

exactly too many hands in the kitchen and its a real mess when lots are cooking..i have a video of a.. read more

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Added on April 6, 2014
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