My missing piece

after all the hurt and pain, the sorrow and heartache, ive still managed to put my heart back together and it has slowly healed, except one piece, the piece in which that one person, the only one, may put a piece of their heart to perfectly fit me, but who is the one with the right piece? or who would ever dare to complete me? for ive been a lost soul for ages, nothing about me seems attractive or appeasing, will that one person with the exact piece fill that void? i think i know who that person may be, but will they know it? will they try? please try for me, just once more, make me whole, make me alive again, show me the way beautiful one, cure me, cure my lonesome heart.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Iz]

BB, I've too thought this as I know many people have. Shh, sometimes I still do. This brought tears to my eyes and a pang to my heart, because it's not just a wondering. It's so much yearning and longing, that in the waiting your heart breaks many times. You then wonder just how long can you let your heart break for just one person. Just how many times are you willing to allow them to shatter your already fragile heart. I, personally, don't know. I haven't yet found that time, when I say, "That's enough. You can't have my heart anymore to stomp on or make me wait for your decision. I just have to move on and find another to love."

[Gheeneil]

The other half probably has same thoughts. Both halves need to work in order to make each other feel complete. It takes time, though. I enjoyed this. Keep it up!

[Fredrick Malkyor]

Dear Brandon,

As I read this poem I felt the lonelyness that you sought to write out. I must say that this has been truly 'Inspiring'. I think I might have found the last half of my new poem and I think I might have it done before the week's end.

[Cherryblossom]

awwwww, this is so good. I know how this goes, but just wait if she leaves and doesn't come back, look for another, you've got plenty of time for that. :) My best wishes to you.
~Karla.

[turtlegirlluver]

I like this poem, it shows your emotions very well and I think others can easily relate. (This would make a good addition to my contest!). Good job!