Are we alone?

Are we alone?

A Story by AaronFreitas
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Real short true story... this was me last night.

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I could feel it… she was standing there watching me as I slept. Subconsciously I awoke to ask her if everything was ok but she didn't respond. I rolled over and looked up to see her shadow... she looked me in my eyes then walked away. Sometimes I forget I live alone but in reality we are never really alone are we?

 


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alf
Hi Aaron. I am not a great fan of prose in poetry, and so very seldom read it. You have written well and it was a pleasant read, but personally, I think that format lacks punch. I did love the wording, you got it right !!! just . . . I'm into structure, not reading books, I guess, alf

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AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

I hear ya buddy... I just had to get out what happened to me when I woke up... true story lol. Than.. read more
alf

2 Years Ago

Cool!! I'll keep reading your writes!!!!
AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you buddy I appreciate that



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I agree with the last line Aaron, we are never really alone. Not only that, but i enjoyed reading the short story. It was, by definition, short and in that well written.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you Ilerah... appreciate it very much. I tried to keep it short figured most people don't wan.. read more
This has an impact, well done. I can relate as well, little bits of paranoia get all of us sometimes.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Haha yes it does Sara... appreciate the feed back :)
If there's anyone that can leave an impact with just a few sentences, it's you. This is painfully accurate and resonates in the mind for a long time!

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AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you Haley... I appreciate your compliment :)
This is interesting. It's the question that arises every time we hear a thud or a shuffle in the middle of the night or even during the day when all is silent except for the that one noise that sends a slight shiver down the length of our entire body. Of course my first thought was, "That's it?" mostly because this sort of thing interests me... but sometimes less is better and this is enough to get me thinking. It might even inspire me.

I enjoyed reading this and I'm glad I came across it. Well done :)

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Haha I have been thinking of working on the story to make it more of a story. When I wrote it I was.. read more
Mirjana Ilic

2 Years Ago

Sounds great :)
I wrote one with the same title did you ever see it? But you're right we aren't really alone we have a Spiritual world encompassed around us

Bill

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AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

No I'll have to check it out... send me a read request. There is definitely a spiritual world all a.. read more
W R Stowe

2 Years Ago

Will do and your welcome
Ooo. The shadow knows. I like the mystery and the unsaid idea of your own shadow (dualism) present. nice work.

~peace, Todd


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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Todd.... appreciate it buddy :)
We are never alone, I love how you're simple at times with your writing . Simplicity is enough when getting out what you choose to share with others. Nice write Aaron..

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AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you my friend. I try to keep it simple I'm not real into the big word deceptive writes much. .. read more
silent poet

2 Years Ago

You're very welcome:)
Great Job. Shows character as a writer and skill as a poet. Really enjoyed it.

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AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Jessica... I may try and do more with this story and/or more with the crazy stuf.. read more
What exactly do you mean when you say you awoke "subconsciously"?

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AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thats a good question lol... I was thinking the way your subconscious processes things... I'm laying.. read more

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