Are we alone?

Are we alone?

A Story by AaronFreitas
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Real short true story... this was me last night.

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I could feel it… she was standing there watching me as I slept. Subconsciously I awoke to ask her if everything was ok but she didn't respond. I rolled over and looked up to see her shadow... she looked me in my eyes then walked away. Sometimes I forget I live alone but in reality we are never really alone are we?

 


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alf
Hi Aaron. I am not a great fan of prose in poetry, and so very seldom read it. You have written well and it was a pleasant read, but personally, I think that format lacks punch. I did love the wording, you got it right !!! just . . . I'm into structure, not reading books, I guess, alf

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AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

I hear ya buddy... I just had to get out what happened to me when I woke up... true story lol. Than.. read more
alf

2 Years Ago

Cool!! I'll keep reading your writes!!!!
AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you buddy I appreciate that



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We are never alone. Shadows haunt us, whether its our own or someone else's. We are haunted by our memories and emotions. The feeling, whether great or dreadful, the moments from the past will be there forever.
Reflect in those memories, find peace and achieve the silence, which will bring you calmness.

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Yanina McKnight

2 Years Ago

I can tell these situations are very personal to you, their is no rush to share it with the world..... read more
AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you :) I will send you a RR when I post it :)
Yanina McKnight

2 Years Ago

Awesome! :)
I gasped! Great work! I have a few "ghost stories" of my own if you'd like to hear...

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Emily

2 Years Ago

Well when I was little, maybe 5 or 6, my dad was in Kuwait during the war. My mom had woken up durin.. read more
AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Wow thats crazy... that would trip me out but maybe he was protecting you. Thats awesome
Emily

2 Years Ago

I think he was. :)
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Tee
True story huh?
That's actually really interesting, it gets you thinking. I especially love the ending 'Sometimes I forget I live alone but in reality we are never really alone are we?'

Thanks for the great write!

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AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Tee... when I wrote that ending it just kind of came out that way... it got the .. read more
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loved it Aaron you just poured out your dream using short and simple words. :) keeping writing more.

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AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Mitali :) I might do some more work on this and develop it into a story :)
Aaron: Very well done. Are we alone? Great title, and made me think...I'm trying to think "No" God is always with us because it's 12:37 am and if I go the other way it could get scary. First, the thought of someone watching over us while we sleep, beautiful, depending on who it is..(angel, here I go again), Second like, very creative, good content, still keeping me in suspence, and the final sentence is thought provoking. I enjoyed it Aaron. Thank you very much. Dale

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AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much... given a choice I prefer a guardian angel watching me haha. You are right... .. read more
Confuser

2 Years Ago

You're welcome....I know I have angels, whether guardians or not...I know a little about what they'r.. read more
No, we're probably not!! Very interesting. I never really used to 'believe' in the 'paranormal', but the more I investigate, the more clear it becomes that there is....Something!!

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AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Yeah it's definitely trippy. I remember an incident when my daughter was real young where she was s.. read more
marcus

2 Years Ago

There was a documentary I saw on netflix about a guy who was seeing really crazy stuff that no one e.. read more
AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Crazy... you never know
This is a thought-provoking idea and very well written! I love that you delved deep into the subconscious mind and the awareness of things outside the norm.

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AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Zoey :) I like to keep things interesting :)
It happens - those shadows linger - and it certainly does beg the question you pose... well-done

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AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you for the review FT... as long as they aren't aggressive ones I am good :)
Ooh, benign or malign, this is a little chilling. We'll never really know the full extent of the world we living, the life of the night will forever be an eternal mystery. Great write, Aaron.

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AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Very true... I feel like if we could truly see everything in this world we would freeze in shock. T.. read more
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I have never experienced a ghost or anything like that. Have dreams that came. That was weird, but...I like the things you talk about in your writes, Aaron :)

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AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you Lynn... I don't like to write about boring stuff... it's gotta be something that interests.. read more

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