A story laced in starlit thread

A story laced in starlit thread

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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The illuminations

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Star

Severed

Torn in two

The illuminations

Now housed in flesh

Wandering over endless ages

One aroused as a dark dragon’s whisper

The other an awakening woman with woven wings

And both endlessly seeking the other’s light

Both needing to find their way home

In timeless echoes their radiance

Now hunts halcyon days

Lilting movements

Lissome sighs

Converging

Fusing

Star

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© 2016 An owl on the moon



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Nicely lain out and also a telling write of what most of us spend our lives searching for. Valentine

Posted 11 Months Ago


An owl on the moon

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much. Hope you had a blessed Thanksgiving. :)
This is really cool, I like this write, very creative

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kindness! :)
Your words are floating within the heavenly realms of the skies in which stars brilliantly shine upon us. There is so much beauty within your poem.
~ Sonia

Posted 1 Year Ago


I love how creative you got with making the whole poem look like words encased in a star. I can only imagine the amount of effort you had to put into making this poem, coming up with the shape and yet housing such a delicately intimate yet powerful poem was truly amazing... I LOVE IT!!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Sangeetha! The words fell into the form as they flowed out, for the most part. Once I rec.. read more
Sangeetha

1 Year Ago

True true, most times genius pieces are a result of flow of the mind 😄
Wow differently crafted....such a unique one...enjoyed....

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much, Lily!
what an imagery! I loved ittt

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

Ah, dear Latifa, how I've missed you! Thank you. :)
this is truly a work of art :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

Dear Sara, I am so glad you came! :)
What a beautifully shape poem. Its the make up of the ying and yang that speaks to me..finding a way back to each other meeting and becoming a shining glorious star harmonizing .stunning vision..

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

I appreciate you coming by so much, dear Sue! May such light always flow through you. :)
Such a finely formatted poem. For me, Its lay-out suggests a gradual increase of affection leading to a passionate love then, calms into intimate friendship. In other words, the poem gently slip and slides through history then settle into an eternal place of beauty.

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

Thank you, dear emmjoy! Love how you see the poem as a living path of this world. :)
I hope they manage to fuse together again happily. Good poem

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

I hope so too, with all my heart. Thank you! :)

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