2:15

Life is anything but stable.

         One day you're at the top then you're struggling in a new different way. It's just up to our character and soul to make some type consistency in this dirt, so consistent that when any challenge passes through us either expected, unexpected, sideways, Fridays, that it won't matter, we'll get through it.

                         The only body we have to live in is ourselves. 

                                       

                                      Your body is a building. You're the super; you make space for whoever you want in your life. If they pay their rent on a reasonable time, they get closer to you and you trust them. There will always be problems in your building. Either is door problems, sink problems, and cable problems, they will always come. 

                                            

 

Having a perfect building in our lives is impossible

 

Is up to us,

to handle the

problems

or let 'em handle us

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Now welcome to the CRZ building.
Every new person he meets is in
 his lobby.
Right now, you’re in his lobby.
Only those who are free spirited
attain a room and how long you keep
hmm,
all depends on you, my friend.
 

CRZ

 

Welcome, let me show you
what’s happening in habitat right now.
My pop’s room is stable,
a little messy
couple arguments lying around the dresser.
My mom’s room is vacant
like a alcoholic’s bottle after a Friday night
just memories imbuing the empty cubicle.  
My cable is working; I view the world
in HD, Hardly Distant.
My girl, she got the sweet room,
is suite to see her smile permeate the shades
she battles the sun sometimes
to see which one is brighter.
And my room... well hey; you have to
live here first to see mine.

 

How is your building looking like?
Are you happy with its conditions?
Do the tenants appreciate your service?
Would you want a room in the CRZ residence???

Author's Note

This is continuation of my poem "8:16"

Reviews

[Calibaster]

This is awesome! I love it! Very well done, I especially liked the different fonts and positions. :) ;)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Innovative! And beautiful and so true.
I really enjoyed the read!
:)

[Leslie Philibert]

Like this, great central metaphor that never tires, fine use of details..I should write a longer review, but
I will simply advise all to have a look at this..

[TPK Stories]

I like the first part...it rang so true.....

[Avinash]

Very innovative and convincing and shows the way ahead.

[Dayran]

German fairy tales depicted the body as a tower and Rapunzel illustrates the genre very well. There's a link here between the people who seek an understanding of self ... and the way the self relates to others in the social circle. It is quite a revelation about the way we engage things within and then bring it out into open contact. Your poem illustrates the experience well.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Wow what a way to look at our life and the people in it.A very thought provoking piece :)

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

Interesting form you're using here. The funny part is I saw the time and instantly thought of was how I used to get out of school at that time

[Donald]

That is amazing. Something to make us all think.