I wish I can be you

I wish I can Be you
Share your joy
share your sadness
.
I wish I can be you
I will handle your sadness
I will let you stay in joy

I wish I can be you
Then nothing can seperate us
nothing can tear us apart

how I wish I am you
nothing is too hard after all

How I wish I can be you

Author's Note

what do you think? I hope you will like it.

Reviews

[Sweets]

I loved the way you repeated the sentence.
This is wonderful!
Great work!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. Wishes may come true. But we need to take chances and maybe we will find happiness. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Kimberly]

Very good. I like the emotion in this, that you wish you could take over their pain. No one can.

[Marie Harrison]

Wow you write as if you are an adult sometimes. I'm amazed.

[Lilly]

So simple yet so effective...
Personally I think it would read better if you changed the 'can' to 'could' buy no one else has said anything so maybe it is fine as it is

nice work

[sarah]

This is really great but you should wish to only be yourself great write! I think people will really be able to ralte

[Dalebear]

Very simple but touching I liked it.

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Very simple and enjoyable!

[Daniel Soloye]

Very simple yet so effective
I love poetry like this
it allows the reader to understand everything fully yet it still challenges the mind wonderful

[.]

this a wonderful poem of the juxtaposition
of happy/sad-together/apart--longing i suppose.

"How I wish I can be you"~~love's deceleration in a sense.
Good work =)