at the table of awareness

at the table of awareness

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto



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praying a little harder than usual
but still thinking of those shoes
and what's really
reflecting up.

Just loved it Mr. Jacob.

Posted 5 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

5 Months Ago

thank you, DIVYA.....

j.
Catholicism tinned in a poem Jacob. The absolute conviction demanded with the absolute exploration of life denied. So very apt.

Posted 5 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

5 Months Ago

thank you for your words, John.
j.
little boys and their playthings lol,when puberty starts to tingle prayers of a different kind are said haha

Posted 5 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

5 Months Ago

thank you for your comment, Stella...

j.
Naughty little boys-I love the playfulness in this poem. Great sense of humor and depiction of adolescent angst. Strict Catholic upbringing vs teenage hormones- and the hormones win! Brought a smile...


Posted 5 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

5 Months Ago

thank you for your words, and insight, Annette.
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at two community colleges and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. Friending works two ways. If we have had .. more..

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