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Written out of nowhere

I never know what to say
Never keep my train of thought
Get too lost in the things I do
Music's the only thing that comforts me
When you walk away from me
And leave me crying though you never know why
Because you never see the tears
Making their way down my pale cheeks
Never hear the sobs
Trying to escape from my chest
The sniffles that cry out
When you are gone from my side
When I am left in darkness and pain
That nothing can help
No one can heal
Coldness leaking into my body
As I realize you're not coming back
I feel so empty
Feel naked to the world
With nothing to make me feel better
Because nothing can heal the wounds
I have caused myself
The blood pours from my veins
But the wounds are not really there
They are just hallucinations in my mind
I could never do it
You are betting on that
As you walk away
Knowing that I cannot live without you
That i never want to try
The tears I cry are a river between us
Never to part like the Red Sea
Because of the damage I have done
The wrong I have caused
Please forgive me my sins
I love you too much to lose you
But it seems there is nothing I can do
To make things right
Ever again.

Author's Note

ignore typos

Reviews

[Staci Brown]

definitely a lot of sadness and pain here... that ache that can't just be swept away, but rather experienced... granted one could usurp the dreaded pain bi drawing forth the blade or thru some other such method but then there'd never be another chance...

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)

[BenightedWhispers]

Very good. No matter how hard we try, the pain never goes away. So much emotion is poured into this writing. Fantastico

[Sarah]

This is definitely a depiction of unedited, raw emotions - which is always interesting to read. The fact that it came out of nowhere could be because you're not yet ready to face these emotions, or deal with them - and thus, they come out when writing. That's a beautiful idea, I think.^^ Great job!

[Angel's Lady]

Tragically sad...beautifully written but tragically sad...