Death

Death

You never see it

You never know when it will come

It hides in the shadows

Waiting

Just for the right moment

It pounces and kills you

Never knowing

Never Seeing

Never hearing

Never had a chance

Death is every where

Waiting for you

Never resting

Never giving up

Never going away

Always with you

Just waiting

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A outstanding poem. Remind me of old Native American belief. Death sits and wait on your left shoulder. If you look quick enough. You can see him. Description and story was very good. No wasted words.
Coyote

[openeyes]

Life is good,life is wise what you write tells your type. You say your alone but how could you if there are others just like you . Death waits but because thats its job life on they other hand becomes tranformed overcoming death as we call it to day GOD.

[Brittany DeFranco]

I love it!! You tell what's what and how it is. No one really knows when life will end, or maybe begin again. Keep writing! ^-^

[Hopless]

That is a awesome pome i love it sounds just like life but gives you a drmatic feeling