Blow to Kingdom Come

Blow to Kingdom Come

A Poem by Frieda P
"

Tongue in cheek, or wherever...

"
You take it in,
 a little at a time
it'd be overwhelming, otherwise
you linger
 in it's essence
you use all your senses
it tickles, it teases, it grows larger
up and down,
 the process goes
get to the head of it
                     you get the feel of it
You feel that stoke again
                                 yearning, throbbing, pulsating....
you whisper
                       'is it good enough?'

         rimmed with exhaltations
                            brimming with anticipation
you can practically taste it
 slow deliberate strokes
                              perch those castles in the air

it builds to a crescendo til 
it bursts forward
 a surged ascension

it's like an explosion, 
                   it whets the appetite
It's a climatic arousal
                     like a nuclear reactor
BAMM you're there! 
An orgasmic expulsion!!
You ride it out.

It it written....

The thought process of poetry
 is truly arousing,
 ...what?
                     you thought I was talking about
                                             something else?  Silly..... ;-)


© 2013 Frieda P



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it builds to a crescendo til
it bursts forward
a surged ascension - WOW!!!!

haha the ending .. the famous Frieda P. quirky humorous twist :P
I love the way you write you have such good control and command over words it's like when you set mind to paper you create magic.



Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Control you say? ha ;-)



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You are so naughty. I think every highschooler should read this in literature class. They would all love poetry more...

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

ha brilliant idea sir! ;-)
Haha, very clever writing - I knew there was a twist, but didn't foresee that. Teasing in more ways than one, but also highly technical and well constructed.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

It was a twist alright! thanks ;-)
Love the humor in this :))))) Job well done

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

...wait, humor, what humor? ;-P
I wish I wrote poetry like this.
"It's like an explosion,
it whets the appetite
It's a climatic arousal
like a nuclear reactor"
Good to create a explosion in the flow of thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Holy what a jazzy review, this one blew my skirt up! Thanks Coyote....coming from you a great compli.. read more
it builds to a crescendo til
it bursts forward
a surged ascension - WOW!!!!

haha the ending .. the famous Frieda P. quirky humorous twist :P
I love the way you write you have such good control and command over words it's like when you set mind to paper you create magic.



Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Control you say? ha ;-)
an erogenous zone of peeking...great piece

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

glad you enjoyed ;-)
Dam Frieda what are you trying to do to me lol A very witty, well worded write. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

LOL I love your reviews!
Carolann Dowsett

4 Years Ago

:)
I liked the way you quietly and slowly built this up to a louder stronger sense of urgency. Even the second time I read it had this feeling about it. You punch line fit perfectly.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Seconds, I'm impressed. ;-)
I knew you were tricking from the first lines! But you did it well... and are clearly accomplished in such arts... I've got to hand it to you, though, tempting as it is to give you a mouthful :-)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Now whatever do you mean by that? ;-)
Caught. I so thought this was about a lollipop :-)

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Frieda P

4 Years Ago

haha cute... sort of, poetry makes suckers of all of us at one time or another I suppose! ;-)
Distant horizons

4 Years Ago

:-)
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

;-P

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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