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Kids, Shaking My Head  Senryu

Kids, Shaking My Head Senryu

A Poem by Frieda P
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If you have kids, you get it, you get the absolute best of them and sometimes the worst.

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Just wanted to say,

kids can be a bitter pill...

the best & the worst






© 2013 Frieda P



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Children should come fully equipped for parental totalitarianism. On "Star Trek: Next Generation", Data, a droid, has an on/off switch. A handy parenting tool. Evolution typically shows no sensitivity to a simple mutation, morphing fast enough to be of use by us. In my house, if the kids earn compliments, that is because they are good kids. If they fall under the anvil of the principle for flagrant disobedience of Serious Rules, then that is my fault. A bitter pill indeed. Cleverly noted thought provoking piece.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

ha pretty funny, this is not Star Trek though, real life doesn't serve us up with the opportunity to.. read more
exotic flotsam

4 Years Ago

You have posted veteran wisdom. I've been an at home dad for 17 years. You write the truth, my mothe.. read more



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Hehe.. kids are wild :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Kids when they are your own "they are just tired, they need a nap"

Their kids "get a f*****g grip on them"

;)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

haha! So true....!! ;-P
+she plays with matches+

4 Years Ago

or...they need to put "their" kids on Ritalin. lol

when my kids bounce or lack focus..I.. read more
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

So true, that's what she said! ;-P
for a mother children are the most wonderful gift of god even if they are misfortunate. Men say what lies in to hurt them but only a mother knows what. Its true kids make and break your life. They can give you a life wonderful than heaven or a life worse than hell. People say having children is fortune but i say having good children is fortune.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

I think sometimes the problem lies in bad parenting, not bad kids....kids will be kids.
critic h

4 Years Ago

todays kids dont listen to their parents. They listen to their friends only and so where lies the fa.. read more
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

In my humble opinion, too many parents want to be friends with their kids, they have enough friends,.. read more
Agree! You are spot on here Frieda. They can take you to Heaven or Hell! We die many times before we really die. A senryu full of wisdom.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Ha you are so wise already and your son is only 6...wait, talk to me when he gets into double digits.. read more
Children should come fully equipped for parental totalitarianism. On "Star Trek: Next Generation", Data, a droid, has an on/off switch. A handy parenting tool. Evolution typically shows no sensitivity to a simple mutation, morphing fast enough to be of use by us. In my house, if the kids earn compliments, that is because they are good kids. If they fall under the anvil of the principle for flagrant disobedience of Serious Rules, then that is my fault. A bitter pill indeed. Cleverly noted thought provoking piece.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

ha pretty funny, this is not Star Trek though, real life doesn't serve us up with the opportunity to.. read more
exotic flotsam

4 Years Ago

You have posted veteran wisdom. I've been an at home dad for 17 years. You write the truth, my mothe.. read more
I am so terrified of having children

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

As you should be! hahaha
lol, very clever, delightfully humorous little Senryh you have written here, Frieda :)) -- lol @ the picture, fits this write, putting it in a pill box ~ thank you for sharing - xoxo

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

ha apparently you can't spell Senyru/Senryu/Senryh either! lol ;-P
ms. barrie

4 Years Ago

noe eye dunt cepl gud :) -- :D
Laughing...well said!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Yep, thanks!
You've gt it right Frieda.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

I know Marie, want to borrow a kid?
Lmfao, I can't wait to have kids :) maybe even have 11 of them so I can start my own soccer team and factory where I can use them as free labor!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

or eternity ha, got so excited there for a sec ;-)
KeeD

4 Years Ago

Hahah for eternity and a day my dahlin :-P
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Pfft! Not like I haven't heard that line before.............................

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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