~and then once again, Exhale Poetry

~and then once again, Exhale Poetry

A Poem by Frieda P


My ink bleeds onto the page
        wandering from the mind's vortex 
  spiral twisters, compulsions 
                      and desires  
  wafting through rambling quills
     hearts devour'd & core exposed
        unstrung melodies of spirit's zest,
         flutters of gossamer wings on zephyr'
s glide
            touching moments unravel'd,
                  nature running poppy wild

               ...and then once again, 

  ~EXHALE POETRY~

start
    the 
          process
                over
                      again

  from the top one more time
    gliding on a dance floor
           of rhythmic seduction
             is it rhyme or reason
                 that keeps me coming back to you













© 2014 Frieda P



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Hi, I wonder how a conversation with you would go down for I believe you speak poetry throughout. I'm reading your work and I just see this poetess who sleeps, eats and breathes poetry. I'm amazed and in awe of your ability and your work. "flutters of gossamer wings on zephyr's glide
touching moments unravel'd," The silky sway to the rhythm. I can see the class of lady and the passion she embeds in her way of life. Wow, I need to Exhale, taking this all in, such a monumental amount of passion, I loved it.

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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Sweet thing to say but hardly, if I spoke this way every day I'm sure they'd lock me away for sure. .. read more



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Is it rhyme or reason... the million dollar question, which needs no answer, for we'd still keep coming back anyway... You exhale, and sweet music sounds across the pages of the WC, Frieda.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Gives you a different sort of a high...doesn't it?

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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Indeed it does, thanks so much.
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Hi, I wonder how a conversation with you would go down for I believe you speak poetry throughout. I'm reading your work and I just see this poetess who sleeps, eats and breathes poetry. I'm amazed and in awe of your ability and your work. "flutters of gossamer wings on zephyr's glide
touching moments unravel'd," The silky sway to the rhythm. I can see the class of lady and the passion she embeds in her way of life. Wow, I need to Exhale, taking this all in, such a monumental amount of passion, I loved it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Sweet thing to say but hardly, if I spoke this way every day I'm sure they'd lock me away for sure. .. read more
You have quite a way of writing.

Taste in music too, interesting.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks for dropping in and your review Eden, muchly appreciated.
Ink bleeding onto the page, seeming to direct your imagination as if it were sentient and capable of thoughts of its own, stringing together lines that you would have not thought of had you not that quill . . . This process could be truly meticulous or ecstatic, depending on the person doing so . . . Well done, I enjoyed this.

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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

I think that just might be so Tai, thanks so much for your thoughts.
is it rhyme or reason
that keeps me coming back to you ---i truly love how you end this. The idea in this piece reminded me of hypergraphia. Always stunning write, Frieda.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Ha gabrielle thanks, I think I've got it, and luckily there is no cure. :-)
Another stunning write Frieda. Beautiful. :) :D

Kaze~

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks muchly Kazie :-)
Blackstar

3 Years Ago

Your welcome. :) :D
~EXHALE POETRY~

start
the
process
over
again

from the top one more time
gliding on a dance floor
of rhythmic seduction
is it rhyme or reason
that keeps me coming back to you

I think that is love. Awesome write.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

I think you're write on Pryde, thanks muchly.
It is reason that keeps you coming back, do not close your account again all else my pen will get dry coz as you know, you are my teacher and to get better i have to keep reading you....aha!!! so it is reason, and I am the reason. I like the beginning of it, my pen bleeds....

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Awh you're too sweet Cassie, no wonder Jack calls you sunshine....thanks so much for your kind words.. read more
~EXHALE POETRY~

start
the
process
over
again

from the top one more time
gliding on a dance floor.

I love this. Very nicely penned! I can definitely relate!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks again Shaquana, thrilled you enjoyed this one!

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