~Battle ASSHAT

~Battle ASSHAT

A Poem by Frieda P
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Read Rita's' Assault Similes' follow up, it's a riot! http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/RitaSev/1311193/#comment-3279177 For just a chosen few, & you know who you asshats are...

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Scream like a lunatic banshee
get all up in everyone's script'd pen,
call us whatever you please
you bullies are all assimilated alike
criticize the things you fear the most
you're weak in the emblematic knees
seriously, who do you think you're kidding, 
you've not a metaphorical backbone
so fire away, machine gun til you're blitz'd
ricochet us through the assimilated heart 
we're bullet proof epic poesy'd warriors
you shoot us down, try to murder a writer's spirit
take your best shot, try to blow us away
we're here with assault similes to stay
fell on your own sword and bled weakness
we've risen to the unverse'd occasion, 
our poetic souls are tougher than titanium





 






© 2014 Frieda P



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Too cool, "Bullet-proof epic poesy'd warriors" now that's a title to wear into battle. My sweet friend, you have slapped someone upside the head this morning with this fire-breathing gem. And even in battlemode, your words still carry an air of poetic elegance, albeit while standing along side the cannons hollering "Fire!" Looks like a valliant victory is at hand and no peace treaty will be needed...just run'em off dear poet.

Amazing as always my friend.

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Ha, can you tell I was perturbed? Some people just don't know when to call it quits...thanks Jack, .. read more



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I'm thinking of a quote from Bruce willis as I read this from the Die hard movies. Yippe Kye Yay....
Yup.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

You missed all the fun Tam, consider yourself lucky!
I wasn't active on WC when you first posted this one, but I see it is just as applicable today as it was half a year ago. Note to self: DO NOT UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES GET LADY FREIDA PISSED! SHE WILL DAMAGE YOU.
I can't quite comprehend the need some reviewers have to tear down another writer's work. There are many on here that are just starting, others who have a mother tongue that is not English, and for a reviewer to rip them apart for a spelling error is just plain dumb.
Well written, Freida.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

I'm nice as pie until you cross me or attack one of my friends, then the claws and fangs come out..... read more
Haha!!!! Awesome! That is just awesome!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Just so you know, you are NOT alone in this battle!! haha
Matching Socks

3 Years Ago

Thanks babe. :)
You are awesome Freida, Pen on! I'm so sorry you are still having to deal with this.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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wtf smh

Then smh wtf.

Then going to read some poetry without the word asshat in it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simply amazing. And I agree with this. Beautiful Frieda it's perfect. :-)

Kaze~

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Haha it's perfect if you're an asshat ;-) Thanks Kazie.
Blackstar

3 Years Ago

Your welcome Frieda. Hahaha
Are these new Asshats or old Asshats? Geez. Can't we all just get along? Rit'as was the first poem I read when i got here today. What the hell is going on?

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angi

3 Years Ago

I'm packin, too.
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Ha, Charlie's D'Angels here....
redflutterby

3 Years Ago

Ha.....packing the heat baby!! ;-ppxo
I love this so much there are no words. Amazing, simply amazing. It's perfect.

Posted 3 Years Ago


heh, still? really? I still think idiots are best ignored... like Carly Simon sang... 'You're so vain, I bet you think this song is about you'. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Oh sometimes you get a poem or two out of it, you have to read Rita's 'assault similes'...ha, it's a.. read more
Some how I forgot to review this...I know many asshats in this world!! And ive kicked more then a few of their asses. As a matter of fact my list of asshats just keeps growing. Guess some people don't have the sense not to f**k with the redhead. But there's no accounting for ignorance as my grandmother used to say.

All I can say is they are everywhere..under rocks and around corners. Time to get the gun and start hunting them down...LMAO>>>>>>>

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

They should stay under their rocks...hope you have good aim Red, these critters are squirrely! ;-)

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