Half past deliverance ~

Half past deliverance ~

A Poem by Frieda P
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_wicked nightmares, perhaps_

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Where the moon sets
     and crimson darkly rises,
living color in helter-skelter
      dreaded dreamscapes 
deafening core truths are pitted,
  inflamed hideous creatures
show their true nature's twist, 
posh ghosts reintegrate from dust
  reenacting on frosty terrain's 
     biting master plan scenario, 
haunting reverberation's, escort 
  splintered runaway strangers
     to have their own way
       free falling from the skies,
startled shortwave shocks 
   half past deliverance's aberrations 
            never to be assuaged
    in smoke and mirrors evocation, 
wounded eyes blink circumstance
      whilst incriminating prisoners
      strike as chord's regrets
          locked under surveillance,
appeased at the gates 
    of bloody damnation's incrimination
 reality's dawning light wavers subdued,
burbles of denial's bubbles popping
    fractured in existing frailty
    breathes contentment 
       in wakes allayed suspicions,
             daybreak filters on chance sanity 



© 2014 Frieda P



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Frieda P

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" runaway strangers
to have their own way
free falling from the skies" - wonderful line! Love what it says and the flow.

You and Kubla have such similar styles, was this a coincidence or do you inspire each other haha.

Lots of good sinister imagery. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Frontier, I didn't think so but many people have said, that's quite the compliment si.. read more



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whoo bring on the darkness and the eerie jeeries while i read this in the dead of the night. great word choice as always. i didnt have to use a dictionary so college must be doing me some good. great as always frieda

Posted 2 Years Ago


Hey Frieda, this review is way past the due date, let me say I did enjoy this am glad to be back


Posted 3 Years Ago


Another great! You are just amazing to me.
"haunting reverberation's, escort
splintered runaway strangers
to have their own way
free falling from the skies,"....just a few of the endless incredible lines from which to draw inspiration. Great write, Frieda P! :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


This piece was written beautifully! The song goes so perfectly with your words, another excellent poem!

Posted 3 Years Ago


I love the last line! "Daybreak filters on chance sanity." This is beautifully said, and the whole thing is beautifully written. I like the play of all the action verbs really giving movement to the train of thought from one image to the next. This was so frantic and yet brilliantly haunting all at the same time. Well done!

Posted 3 Years Ago


" runaway strangers
to have their own way
free falling from the skies" - wonderful line! Love what it says and the flow.

You and Kubla have such similar styles, was this a coincidence or do you inspire each other haha.

Lots of good sinister imagery. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Frontier, I didn't think so but many people have said, that's quite the compliment si.. read more
Filled with so much pain and fear, and the imagery took me to all them places. Your poetic pen is on fire.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Woo thanks, muchly appreciate your kind words....!
storiestotell

3 Years Ago

Well, it is so true, and you are very welcome.
This one put me in mind of an acid trip

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

...and how would you know that, pray tell Tate? ;)
You covered every emotion, fear and longing, plus a few emotions and situations which I find indescribable. That, then is the real meaning of "nightmare," I'm thinking. Oh, and to cap it all off that last line was a kickass last line.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Hitchhiker..
A nightmare so darkly engrossing...I would not want daybreak and sanity to intrude...till I have slayed every dark shadow lingering in my realms...Amazing poetry from you Frieda...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks Divya, not easy to slay a nightmare, those krakens are wickedly sneaky.....
DIVYA

3 Years Ago

I know Frieda, but you put portray the nightmare so well, We are tempted to try our best.
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

That's when we put our monsters to ink and paper, and hopefully their voices aren't so antagonizing... read more

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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