In the darkness of night

This is the first time that I am writing my poetry about something other than my feelings and reality. This is completely new to me, yet its here coz it just flowed onto paper.

 

In the Darkness of night

 

 

In the darkness of night,

the moon does arise,

with thousands of secrets untold.

Silent whispers and warm breaths,

they sigh against each other.

She doesn’t want the night to end,

‘coz the morning would bring a different bend.

Tired and sated they rest,

against each other they fall asleep.

When the morning sun shone upon her,

she knew that it was all over.

He’s gone and she is alone…

But she smiles for she knew his secret.

She knew she’d meet him again,

and again…

in her deepest dreams,

every night.

Author's Note

Let me knw how it is.:)

Reviews

[Michael X]

This is awsome, I particularly liked how the vision funnels to the ending as in the last line punctuating the meaning and imagery in essence, the flow come to life in the readers heart, to ponder the magic
that keeps a soul dreaming, the imagery stirs emotion, beautifully done, thanks for sharing your talent

[dutch2lips]

this is filled with sensuality, well penned!

[BABSIE BEE]

I love this. So full of emotion and dreamy visions. So beautifully edited. Thanks for sharing.
Babsie Bee xx

[Peaches]

Very tantalizing, almost magical. I love the mystery of it, and enjoyed it very much.

[Helena]

I loved this sweet little write. Well done! ~ Helena

[Lydia]

Loved your descriptive powers and thought this piece flowed beautifully. Great write!

[a]

Sweet... I wish it would be longer, it ended to soon :)
Thank you!

[Nataliya Maize]

Beautifully done!

[Grey]

it's very nice. you get a sense of the story through the series of almost scattered images and instants stolen into the poem... i liked it a lot

[Taylor H]

this was great. It did give a off some magic

[Tony]

Great presentation and isn't it amazing what our dreams bring to life in our night time slumber. There is one sentence that has me baffled, it is almost like she knows the person of her dreams, with a mysterious or dark secret, to dream of this would be unusual, I would think. Beautiful writing.

But she smiles for she knew his secret.

Tony