Jagged Steps

The

footfalls

of wisdom

traverse

steep paths

of

intuition

on

roadways

burdened

with

simple words

of wisdom

which

often

are

dismissed

~ Georgian Bay 

 

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Indeed, words of wisdom are often laughed at...until one encounters a situation to which they apply! I enjoyed the stepped margins of this. The vocabulary is stellar and the thoughts are wise. Enjoyed it. Lydi**

[MCS]

Thank you for the visit and kind words.

[Sami Khalil]

"intuition

on

roadways

burdened

with

simple words

of wisdom"

[Sami Khalil]

Very wise and powerful. I like the form , too. Kudos....::::))))

[MCS]

Thank you, for the visit and kind words my friend.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. ....:::))))

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Very cool and impactful (?) style in the lines descending, or ascending, like steps, with the last word "dismissed" all alone as it tends to be. Dismissed as "simple words of wisdom" often tend to be. Great theme, rhythm and flow. Powerful and rugged image bejewels this exquisite poem.

[MCS]

Thank you Annette, I appreciate the kind words.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Hi Mary, you are very welcome! I wasn't sure "impactful" was a real word- Ha!

[MCS]

Hello Annette, you are an amazing wordsmith therefore your choices are always bang on. Thanks again :)

[MCS]

Maturity of mind is the capacity to endure uncertainty.