Jagged Steps

Jagged Steps

A Poem by MCS

The

footfalls

of wisdom

traverse

steep paths

of

intuition

on

roadways

burdened

with

simple words

of wisdom

which

often

are

dismissed


~ Georgian Bay 

 


© 2017 MCS



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Overall, I enjoyed this poem, however, I felt as though it was a little choppy with the way that this poem was divided up. The "of" "intuition" "on" is the only part that I didn't feel flowed very well. I liked how this poem began with "wisdom" and ended with it as well.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Indeed, words of wisdom are often laughed at...until one encounters a situation to which they apply! I enjoyed the stepped margins of this. The vocabulary is stellar and the thoughts are wise. Enjoyed it. Lydi**

Posted 2 Months Ago


MCS

2 Months Ago

Thank you for the visit and kind words.
"intuition

on

roadways

burdened

with

simple words

of wisdom"

Posted 6 Months Ago


Very wise and powerful. I like the form , too. Kudos....::::))))

Posted 11 Months Ago


MCS

11 Months Ago

Thank you, for the visit and kind words my friend.
Sami Khalil

11 Months Ago

You are welcome. ....:::))))
Very cool and impactful (?) style in the lines descending, or ascending, like steps, with the last word "dismissed" all alone as it tends to be. Dismissed as "simple words of wisdom" often tend to be. Great theme, rhythm and flow. Powerful and rugged image bejewels this exquisite poem.

Posted 11 Months Ago


MCS

11 Months Ago

Thank you Annette, I appreciate the kind words.
Annette Pisano-Higley

11 Months Ago

Hi Mary, you are very welcome! I wasn't sure "impactful" was a real word- Ha!
MCS

11 Months Ago

Hello Annette, you are an amazing wordsmith therefore your choices are always bang on. Thanks again .. read more
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Posted 11 Months Ago



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MCS

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