A Poem by JRB

The story untold



                 When it comes to us

                                                    There is

                           But one story

                                                 To be told

                                                                   The end


© 2012 JRB

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The end is a bitter reality to be consummated forever in death.

Posted 3 Years Ago

A death to everything...bittersweet

Posted 5 Years Ago

Oh no, that's so sad! Incredibly powerful though, they way you've layed it out. I liked it, thank you for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago

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Wow. a short and powerful poem. you fabricated such a perfect relatable poem :)

Posted 5 Years Ago

Oh wow!!!
This hit hard and made me reel lol
The form is cascading, pure impact...

Posted 5 Years Ago

The format you choose make the words even more poignant! Well done ~ :-)

Posted 5 Years Ago

There's something so captivating and sad about this word flow. Despite "The end" , it seems open that all? You leave the reading the story good...bad? We want more. This was powerful despite the brevity. High scores.


Posted 6 Years Ago

So simple, so beautiful.

Posted 6 Years Ago

Wonderful job with this poem. I love the simplicity of it and how few words you use. Really nice job!

Posted 6 Years Ago

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Added on March 5, 2012
Last Updated on March 5, 2012



Grantville, PA

To my writes, I have been told that my writings, relate to the poetic styles of, John Donne, George Herbert, and many other early 17th-century English poets. By believing that enlightenment c.. more..

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