The Shoe!

The Shoe!

A Poem by Thomas Fitzgerald
"

This is the response to a challenge laid down by none other than my dear sweet friend Muse - I do hope I didn't dissapoint!

"

This blasted tyrant with corest holds,

A memory longs for times of old,

When feet were fit for the sofest ground,

Dear women thread without a sound.

 

Animals hide does sheath the rough soles,

Merry men wash dirt into hollow bowls,

Pesky pins never far from needle friends,

Arch's soften to house slight softened bends.

 

Jimmy Choo works more and more fast,

Within leather moulds the jail is cast,

High heels for some and flat for few,

Damn the dreaded bright leather shoe!


© 2012 Thomas Fitzgerald



Author's Note

Thomas Fitzgerald
A little out of my comfort zone, but I ejoyed the challenge!

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Muse, you got some abstract challenges, and your picture is the coolest glitter I think I've ever seen XD And the poem, Thomas, was entertainment and brought about some ideas. Definantly an in depth outlook upon the dreaded bright leather shoe ;) XD Really well written with a fast paced flow, I enjoyed reading, thanx for writing ^.^

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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great concept...loved to read it..

Posted 1 Month Ago


Thomas Fitzgerald

1 Month Ago

Thank you.
Challenge completed! What a fun poem to get into!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Challenge met and completed with flying colors.
Muse should be proud of you.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Fun to read...zip ed de do da tempo...

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Funny, but very well written!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice , I see a little out of comfort zone but, that was pretty good viewing the shoes from the different types, felt and all. Well done.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful rhyme, cute, and great humor!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You ripped this one out quite well.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You did very well here and a little of the old world as well you are showing your great education

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Thomas Fitzgerald

Wexford, Leinster, Ireland



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