THE SEASON

THE SEASON

A Poem by kublakhan27
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Beneath the itch of granite gauze
bingo balls of kneecaps shuffle
the magnesium furrowing of
low pressure's seasonal scissors
Summer with its yellow robe retracted
spitefully relieves itself
on carousel ponies in the steampunk couture
of pasteurized porcelain upholsteries
No sympathy for even summer's coyest icons
kicked from the calender's preoccupation
like a muddy leap year
into the liturgical make-up
of birthday executors and
pre-nuptial commemorators
as the system funnels impatient sleet
through the wind like a plague plunging
every sigh with a damp heavy hiccup
and painting every window grey and green
like unofficial colours of a
sci-fine day for a disturbance

© 2012 kublakhan27



Author's Note

kublakhan27
So, has anyone noticed my obsession with the changing of the seasons yet? :P

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So, has anyone noticed my obsession with the changing of the seasons yet?

It actually just dawned on me, lol. I'm quite intrigued and wondered what significant event could have triggered this obsession. But I'm not going to dig deeper:) Anyway, like your other poems, season is always in the heart of it but in some way it isn't immediately apparent in the lines. This one made me think, again :D

Ambiguously beautiful..

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

5 Years Ago

As always, I'm glad that I was able to entertain/challenge you with my work :D

As far.. read more
Mary Ann M.

5 Years Ago

I guess everything is interconnected as the changing of the season and the comprehension of good and.. read more
kublakhan27

5 Years Ago

You always have such an eloquent way of looking at things...well said :)



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Nice depiction of the occurrences during your envisioned summers. Very articulate and eloquent. Nice work. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

5 Years Ago

Thanks very much :)
very nice :) haha, which season would be your favorite i wonder haha. nature and the seasons are very beautiful to write about :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


kublakhan27

5 Years Ago

haha yeah i tell ppl "well you can't wish it away so you might as well learn to enjoy it" especially.. read more
quixotic_rose

5 Years Ago

im supremely jealous of that.. i wished i lived there! :p thats ok, one day i might just live in a l.. read more
kublakhan27

5 Years Ago

Well I do hope you find your proverbial "happy place" in the future :) I may post some pics from my.. read more
This is wonderful. O_O

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kublakhan27

5 Years Ago

Thanks very much :)
Lovely write , the seasonal change amazing and sometimes so many seasons in one day.

Posted 5 Years Ago


kublakhan27

5 Years Ago

Thanks very much^^
So, has anyone noticed my obsession with the changing of the seasons yet?

It actually just dawned on me, lol. I'm quite intrigued and wondered what significant event could have triggered this obsession. But I'm not going to dig deeper:) Anyway, like your other poems, season is always in the heart of it but in some way it isn't immediately apparent in the lines. This one made me think, again :D

Ambiguously beautiful..

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

5 Years Ago

As always, I'm glad that I was able to entertain/challenge you with my work :D

As far.. read more
Mary Ann M.

5 Years Ago

I guess everything is interconnected as the changing of the season and the comprehension of good and.. read more
kublakhan27

5 Years Ago

You always have such an eloquent way of looking at things...well said :)
This poem is beautiful and amazing!
I loved it!
100/100

Posted 5 Years Ago


kublakhan27

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much :D
this is very colorful and unique, i like it! It does a very effective job of describing how the seasons change and how the next comes. Very well done!

Posted 5 Years Ago


kublakhan27

5 Years Ago

Thanks very much :)
LOfCharlemagne

5 Years Ago

You are very welcome :)
I love the lack of rhymes throughout most of the poem and the subtle story this tells. I also admire the ability to make no form work so well. I enjoy the non-traditional forms of poetry, so this was a great read! Keep it up!

Posted 5 Years Ago


kublakhan27

5 Years Ago

You may have gotten this note already, but I might have made a mistake and not actually sent it the .. read more
Admiral Kirk

5 Years Ago

Yeah, it's pretty cool. :)

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Added on July 24, 2012
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Tags: kneecaps, itch, summer, yellow, steampunk, carousel, liturgical, birthday, plague, hiccup, grey, green

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Nova Scotia, Canada



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My first book is out! Any comments that anyone may have to offer regarding my work would be deeply appreciated, as I'm yet to get a review. www.amazon.com/Waltz-Around-Swirls-Steven-Fortune/dp.. more..

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