IT'S YOUR BIRTHDAY NOODLEBOP

IT'S YOUR BIRTHDAY NOODLEBOP

A Poem by kublakhan27
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Kind of silly but hope you like it ;) 07 26 14

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Let's go dancing on the ceiling
Let's go to the hop
Let's hide out and light the candles
on the cake for Noodlebop

For the sweetest lass you'll meet
For a glow that makes you stop
and realize your day's been made
That's the way of Noodlebop

So infectious is her smile
So poetic you could drop
So in awe you'd be of her hypnotic words
Smart, that Noodlebop

You are loved by us you see
You're the cream of the Cafe's crop
Are you ready for a party?
It's your birthday Noodlebop!

© 2014 kublakhan27



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OMG!! I'm smiling like a buffoon right now and I'm completely ready for dancing on the ceiling... Bring it on!! Thanks my sweet Steveroo for taking the time to write this, it was a lovely surprise in my RR's. One I am so happy to find - thanks my sweetest friend. You're a true gem!

Thanks Steveroo!!! •xoxo•

Posted 3 Years Ago


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kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

I'm so glad you like it bud, that makes my day :) I obviously didn't want to do something too serio.. read more



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Kublakahn, this is fabulously sweet. What a nice thing to give precious Nooodlehead for her birthday. Love it!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

So glad you enjoyed it BOS :)
:-D How cute! I can always appreciate such festive writes from you Steven! Xo!

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kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Haha Thanks so much Mel, the problem is it usually takes a special event to get such a positive piec.. read more
A weird, lovely piece. I like this quite so.

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kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Thank you Kenneth...just a silly little rhyme for a good friend.
Very sweet and cute. Happy Birthday Noodlehead.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed it, she's a good friend :)
Very creative and very sweet write for the Noodle

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kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Thank you Renee :)
This is adorable! It makes me smile and sing it out load! Very nice and creative.

I really like how this flows, it has a great rhythm! Great job

Posted 3 Years Ago


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kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

So glad you enjoyed it Lune, thank you :)
:) :) :) I just cannot post enough smiles for this one, Steve - not only a sweet birthday message for Sye, but a darn good rhymer, too! Admit it, you had fun with this one! ;)

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kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Haha I had a blast writing this one my friend...I reeled it off in about ten minutes, it just came t.. read more
Love it! Original, comic, fitting right in with the poem, in fact, bringing the lit candles to the party. Bravo!

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kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Alfred :)
It's cute and fun!nice job:)

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kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed it Lyan :)
You crafted this quite well Steve
for a sweet Birthday girl.


And I see she just loved it.


I loved the last stanza's lines.


You are loved by us you see

You're the cream of the Cafe's crop

Are you ready for a party?

It's your birthday Noodlebop!


I love that Noodle bop cute.



Blessings. Benita/ Kindred poet

Posted 3 Years Ago


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kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed it Benita, thank you :)
Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet

3 Years Ago

you're welcome Steve. was a pleasure to read. Blessings. Benita/ Kindred poet

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